just tell me if u feel me.
Posted 08-12-2008 at 05:52 PM by Stephon
the sky darkens, doors of doom opens, i keep hopen, that the earth didnt start smokin........ and blowin, im waitin for the day, the day where the
clouds open, meteors rain on my day, but hey i pushed it all away. ya see... when times get bad its sad, but the world doesnt have to come to an end. ya just push it aside and keep lookin within and let your pains and problems descend.
i had to do this over 60 times, but hey who's countin? i'll have to face it, problems keep comin but you'll have to keep runnin the race of life. hope dis was some good advice.
clouds open, meteors rain on my day, but hey i pushed it all away. ya see... when times get bad its sad, but the world doesnt have to come to an end. ya just push it aside and keep lookin within and let your pains and problems descend.
i had to do this over 60 times, but hey who's countin? i'll have to face it, problems keep comin but you'll have to keep runnin the race of life. hope dis was some good advice.
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Comments
 |  nice poem or rap. It's deep |
Posted 08-15-2008 at 11:50 AM by Ling  |
| |  this is nice. but for some, like forsay me, the problems grab you by the throat and suffocate you until you have headaches that ring like thunder, and your so lost that you lose the will to speak in fear of speaking the wrong thing. Fear grips your mind and sadness grips your heart, until you dont control your emotions, but they control you, and u are forced to live your bleak, dreary, and endless nightmare to the point of mental desperation, where suicide becomes the only alternative. Try that on for size... |
Posted 08-16-2008 at 02:33 AM by AmyLeexoxo  |
| |  This is a good piece of writing. Other people need to get this message. (Did you really do this 60 times?) |
| Posted 10-26-2008 at 11:31 PM by jarrick23 |
| |  I can tell youve put work into that. |
| Posted 11-21-2008 at 07:05 PM by Plueish |
| |  Thanks people! i did put time into it and i did this OVER 60 times(suprised i didnt go emo) lol well every mistake i made i threw it away, sooo maybe 60times is just a high expression. its not Thaat good to do it 60 times, lol |
| Posted 11-22-2008 at 02:54 AM by Stephon |
| |  I like it =] |
| Posted 11-22-2008 at 03:03 AM by Sukiyah |
| |  ooOooOooooOo~ =0 |
| Posted 11-22-2008 at 03:06 AM by POOPII~KII |
| | you to are bad critics lol |
| Posted 11-22-2008 at 03:08 AM by Stephon |
| |  you rap? i liked it it was deep and real. check out my blog for my one rap i got rid of my old ones. |
| Posted 2 Weeks Ago at 10:50 PM by princedoublej |
| | thx alot prince |
| Posted 1 Week Ago at 11:29 PM by Stephon |
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