My Comic

[zpo25]

Okay I never used those Sprites lol. Anyways I no the drawing and quality is bad cos art hates me... but do you like them?

[Dray]

That was nice.

[zpo25]

thanks. Anymore comments?

[Linkeh]

Ruby is going to give me nightmares i know it D=.

Just a little short. In need of a better punch line aswell but not bad xP

[zpo25]

Originally Posted by link64

Ruby is going to give me nightmares i know it D=.

My work is done.

[zpo25]

Gotta go to bed uh sorry about big space/detail/everything.

[Noah2536]

Score:
5/10

Constructive Criticism:
I believe you could do better than that. Maybe spend a little more time thinking of a script. Also add some time making nice drawings. Remember, if you want to make something as close as you can to perfect; you got to spend time on it.