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the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 10-28-08

there was once a boy who slayed the evil that rested on the wind the evil they called ganondorf the boy met many many freinds and decided to travel with those who aided him in his quest to recover his sister from a disturbing evil. he traveled with them and had a terrible nightmare cased by evil fog the results of that nightmare would reflect in the boys life luckily he passed the evil and continued his life

niko: so what do you think?
tetra: stop it with your storyboards niko give us a break!
gonzo: miss were encountering heavy storms!
tetra:evreybody get down hold onto something thats not vunerable to the heavy winds!
(the ship then gets attacked by a giant squid a species thought to be long gone)
the ship and the crew have dissapeared and all link tetra and niko can remeber is the giant squid and its just them three stranded on an island
tetra:wheres evreybody gone?
niko: we must have fainted.
tetra:niko start builkding something we can drift to a better island on me and link will search this cave to see if anyone went in
niko: yes miss!
(link and tetra enter the cave but see no survivors)
tetra: no ones here what could have happned!
(a couple of chu chu jellys fall from the hole in the caves ceiling link tetra explains all the moves to link after this they exit the cave after hearing niko shouting)
niko:MISS GET OUT HERE NOW!!!
tetra:what is it!!!!
(niko points to a random peice of stone in the sea quite far away and hands tetra the telescope)
tetra: link take a look at this
(link recieves the telescope and looks out at sea and sees ganondorf on the small peice of land)
tetra: the one that caused the world into despair thats him isnt it the one who we had to sacrifice the golden land for
(link nods)
the figure that appears to be ganondorf points at the group and dissapears
tetra: what was all that about?
(suddenly a group of monsters appear out of nowhere!)
link kills them
tetra: we need to get moving fast niko whats the closest island to here?
(niko observes the scenery and tells tetra and link some shocking news!)
niko: tetra where not in our homeland anymore i, i dont know where we are...
tetra: well lets head north did you make anything at all?
(niko points to a small peice of wood which is his work form earlier)
tetra:we cant do anything with that all that can be used for is to light a fire
niko: then we will camp here for the night its getting late...
tetra: you must be joking after what weve seen!!!
(all of a sudden the king of red lions boat appears!)
boat:struggling there!
tetra: we have to tell you something!!!
boat: i know the full story! thats why i came here!
tetra: the crew do you know where they are?
boat: i wish i could help you with that but i honestly dont know...
tetra: we need to move now! we dont know where the closest island is!
boat: well...i could take you to towood island its quite big you sould rest there we can ask the islanders if theyve seen anything....
tetra: ok lets move out!

i hope you like it! its only the opening so get prepared to see the rest soon!


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Re: the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 11-02-08

Seems very interesting. I would like to see more of it.
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Re: the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 11-02-08

thank you very much! for being the first person to leave a comment have some karma the rest of this story will be released next week look out for it!
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Re: the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 11-05-08

Thanks i hope to see the next part.
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Re: the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 11-07-08

Dude this story is great.
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Re: the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 11-07-08

Cool I Loved It Have A Karma Kookie
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Re: the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 11-07-08

Decent story but the grammar is atrocious. Use spell check so it's easy for us to read it.

For example, I had to read this twice:

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gonzo: miss were encountering heavy storms!
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Re: the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 11-09-08

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Decent story but the grammar is atrocious. Use spell check so it's easy for us to read it.

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yeah sure ill keep that in mind!
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Re: the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 11-09-08

Yeah, you have a couple spelling and grammatical mistakes, but otherwise pretty good job. So far I rate it 3 out of 5 which is decent. I grade harshly...
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Re: the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass the opening! - 11-13-08

i have actually posted the next chapter already its called something like the sequel to zelda phantom hourglass part 2
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