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The power of the Phantom! - 11-05-08

The Power of the Phantom!

It was a normal day in the park.
Sun was setting it was wonderful. That all turned to chaos and panic.
Dropships started to drop out of the sky, alarms were going off,
people were screaming, missiles flying, the worlds end had started.

I think I should start from the beginning. It started … years ago.
Planet earth was so young, anxious, ready to expand.
They never thought what waited for them out there.
In the Nebula 623735 there was a huge planet called “Mir”.
Earthlings heard of Mir as the last stop. That is because.
Of the Mirian Empire! Swift, Powerful, and pretty much unbeatable.
Their leader was a mysterious one. His real identity is unknown but,
the citizens call him “The Phantom Virus”! Eons ago they where the ones
who wiped out the Martians. Their new target was “Earth”!

Phantom Virus: Are all the systems up and running as planed?
Captain: I think so.
Phantom Virus: You think...do you want me to come over and rip you apart one by one with my bare hands...or do you want to check...
Captain: Ill .. che..ck.
Phantom Virus: Good...
Phantom Virus: Were are the current targets...
Captain: lets see...
Captain: The U.S. Pentagon, Area 51, and Building 5356/
Phantom Virus: Lets go to the building first.
Captain: Why sir?
Phantom Virus: (lifts up captain by neck) do you dare question me?
Captain: (nods)
Phantom Virus: (throws captain out the air lock)
Phantom Virus: Contact the armada … we need troops.
A.I: Yes Sir.
Phantom Virus: Alright then...
Phantom Virus: Open the airlock
A.I: Umm...ok sir
*Phantom Virus Jumps out of the air lock and land right near the capitol building making a crater. Solders come around him.*
Soldier 1: What was that?
Soldier 2: Its Moving!
Soldier 2: WTF!
Soldier 1: Stand up with your arms up!
*Phantom Virus emerges from crater.*
Phantom Virus: O alright.
*Phantom Virus's hand starts to glow and he levitates Soldier 1 and Soldier 1 is trying to break the invisible hold on his neck. Phantom Virus throws the solder and you can hear his bones cracking over the concrete.*
Phantom Virus: *Stares at Soldier 2* Do you want to end up like him?
Soldier 2: No....
Phantom Virus: Then join me. And for now on...call me sir
Soldier 2: Yes Sir!
Phantom Virus: Alright then
Phantom Virus: Where is the capitol buidling?
Soldier 2: um...
Phantom Virus's hand glows
Soldier 2: no please don't
General: Put the kid down *has rocket launcher in hand*
Phantom Virus: How amusing...
*Phantom Virus throws the soldier*
General: You asked for it
Phantom Virus: Come on ... give it your best shot!
*General fires phantom virus stands there with no scratches on his armor*
*Phantom Virus bends the rocket launcher*
Phantom Virus: Puny earth lings
*Phantom Virus's hand glows and the general incinerates *
Phantom Virus: well well well....A.I
A.I.: Yes Sir?
Phantom Virus: Sent out the destroyers!
A.I.: But, sir they are unstable....alright firing destroyers
*Out of the sky fly a army of robots named Destroyers*
Phantom Virus: You know what to do....
Phantom Virus: I have some thing i have to do.
*Door blasts open at Building 5356*
*Phantom Virus and his AI droid walk in stealthily.*
Phantom Virus: Do you see it?
A.I.: Just looks like a bunch of boxes to me sir.
*A box falls off of the stack*
Phantom Virus: Stay here.
*Phantom Virus pulls out a AK-47 and aims it at the box*
Phantom Virus: Well lets see whats in side shall we?
*Phantom Virus opens the box to find data chips, armor, and some other personal belongings that won't be revealed until later in the story*
A.I: Sir?
Phantom Virus: What?
A.I: ...I would...come look ... at ...this
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In the next chapter Phantom Virus and the A.I. find some thing. Stay tuned.
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New Part added on November 15, 2008.






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Re: The power of the Phantom! - 11-07-08

New part added
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Re: The power of the Phantom! - 11-07-08

lol i liek this so far.
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Re: The power of the Phantom! - 11-08-08

Yes, please add more, I CRAVE IT. Lol.
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Re: The power of the Phantom! - 11-08-08

Nice! Keep it up.
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Re: The power of the Phantom! - 11-08-08

i like it well done.
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Re: The power of the Phantom! - 11-08-08

Due to popular demand a new part has been added.
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Re: The power of the Phantom! - 11-08-08

Yay a new episode yayzee.
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Re: The power of the Phantom! - 11-08-08

I will try to add more later.
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Re: The power of the Phantom! - 11-15-08

Sorry for the long wait but a new part has been added.
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