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That big freak. - 12-25-08

Note that in mind that this story isn't like my fanfic, it's more like a novel that I'm planning on writing more of in the near future when I get some spare time. I thought I'd post this on Christmas day for the join and a present to FC, along with a song that I'll write or jot down soon. Hope you like it! :]





That big freak!


Prologue:

My name is Eric Samuels; well at least that’s what my foster parents named me when I was first given to them. I wasn’t a very fond of person when I was little. I mostly spent my time with my foster dad, Andrew Samuels, playing catch. After a day of playing, they’d go in and have a few snacks where his foster mom, Caroline Samuels, would cook dinner and such. They had a pet dog named Zeus, of course named after the Greek god. He was indeed a good doggie, yet he had amazing stealth and speed. More like lightning bolts, running just above the ground, it freaked me out at first, but then I got used to it. Just like how I got used to my life, until I turned sixteen. My life changed drastically, and I had things to clear up with my foster parents. Like whom my real parents were, and what was happening to me.

Chapter 1: The beginning.

I had a great life, throughout my child hood; I haven’t real communicated much with the other kids in my school and my neighborhood. I read books, did a couple of Rubik’s cubes in my spare time. I always completed my homework first, and then played with my dad in catch or the game tag. We always laughed and had our time, until I got old. I started going on the internet on my computer that my mum had bought me for my fourteenth birthday. I was so excited, I used it every day since I was fifteen, and I tried to incorporate family time or play with Zeus. But, one day I was searching the web and my screen went blank and my screen was shaking so quickly. I tried unplugging the electric wire, but it shocked me so suddenly, I let go immediately. I tried grabbing the screen, but then something happened. The screen turned on, and something weird popped up. Nothing was in the URL link box, nothing but I was on some weird site where this kid said he was seventeen and weird stuff were happening. He said he was changing in drastic ways, and it was indescribable thing happening now. The things I read were quite amazing, it listed that he could fly, shoot lightning, and thought of marriage so often. That he could see who loved who with his own eyes, he was also starting to see leadership in his eyes and grown to lie more and more often to his parents.
I knew what I had to do first, besides eat my dinner. My mum was making pot roast with a side of mashed potatoes with gravy. But that wasn’t the point even though he often thought of it; it was that he and this person had to meet up. Soon, he could feel uneasy things in his body stirring up, something with magnificent polarity. He started to feel stronger in his veins, and feel a faint radiated heat from the sun in them. But I was dosing off quick, I kept thinking about the pot roast my mum was preparing for me, it smelled delicious. Oh wait, I was supposed to be doing something…Oh yeah! I grabbed my mouse and dragged it along the key pad and clicked “reply”. I typed my message saying that we’ll meet up in the airport where I’ll ride the airplane to “Chicago” to meet the dude.


Chapter 2: Hidden secrets

My mum was crying all day because I was leaving for the airport, and my dad said he knew I’d be alright, but he wanted me to promise him I’d come back in one piece. I promised, after I left the room to get in to my plane where there’d be a seat waiting for me, my mum started wailing. I got a little embarrassed by it, but I knew she only cared for me, and then I realized the date. February 27th and this year was actually a leap year. Which means, it’d be the exact day of the year, I was born? I was so excited, but it means I’d have only a day to research about the other guy in Chicago. Then I heard something loud rumble, it was my belly, I was starving. I haven’t eaten anything from last night’s dinner which was delicious pot roast. I then grabbed a bunch of money from my wallet and counted it exactly, so that I knew I wouldn’t get ripped off for a cheese burger. That’s when I called over the flight attendant over to fetch me some food, that I could eat satisfying my stomach. I started dining on the sandwich so quickly that I ate half of it in ten seconds, that’s when something weird started happening. A sunny day turned into a hail storm with lightning striking everywhere, attacking the airplane I was riding that moment. Then some heavy landed on the plane, leaving us crashing down to the ground quickly and fast.

I opened the latch and climbed on to the wing of the airplane. I looked around and saw a huge man, he seemed at least ten feet tall, and the mass of his body must of been over a thousand. I yelled "Who are you? All these innocent people will die if you don't get off!" Zeus said "This is my territory son of Helios, you will suffer the dire consquences if you do not reach up to the heavenly lands where you will meet your father and control the sun radiation." I was confused, my father was in england waiting for my arrival. Then Zeus zapped up in to the air and vanished within Lightning, and a voice from the distance said "You have three days". Then I found myself in the airplane, in the exact seat I was in then the pilot said through the intercom "we will reach the destination in a few minutes, please sit with your seat belts on."
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Re: That big freak. - 12-26-08

This story is getting good, I wonder what hit the airplane?
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Re: That big freak. - 12-26-08

hey good work keep it up.
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Re: That big freak. - 01-17-09

New paragraph on to the chapter two was made.
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Re: That big freak. - 01-17-09

Nice story dude. =]
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Re: That big freak. - 01-18-09

Nice work! I can't wait for more =0
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Re: That big freak. - 01-18-09

Good story. I like how its in first person.
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