Stumbing Confrontation

[Eric]

Knowing whats left, and knowing whats right
might lead you in knowing some strife
what is good and what is fake

it leads to those called mistake
i cannot believe the truth in lies
so don't give me one high

five and knowing where is when
where love is, or isn't, a wren
flying off into the distance

the distant distance where you
where I can say i do in true
not knowing where to hide

or abide this will for which i lied
the awkwardness in the stanza
of life, knowing the extravaganza
enjoying everything in life
or love

whichever you believe to be
whatever you choose to free
not knowing what it's like to see
a line that frankly comes from me

not knowing which pun preferred
allows the confrontation deferred
and another meeting deterred
allows me to be free

Knowing whats left, and knowing whats right
might lead you in knowing some strife
what is good and what is fake

it leads to those called mistake
i cannot believe the truth in lies
so don't give me one high

five and knowing where it is, or when
and knowing where love is begin
flying off into the distance

the distant distance where you
where I can say i do in true
not knowing where to hide

[R1kk1]

Amazing...

*steals*

xD

[Linkeh]

Originally Posted by Rik

Amazing...

*steals*

xD

Id so lol if i seen that go into your course work xD.

Really good Eric. Looks like something I would have actualy read in English.

[Eric]

Thanks guys ^_^ I just showed it to my friends here and they really like it too. I'll try to remember to post when I write them.

[nimhuzamaki24]

that really good how you start a new paragraph with the first word also being the ending word from the previous one. please make more. (^-^☆

[Hiroko]

That's awesome, ducky.
No, really. =|