The Power You Give Love....

[nimhuzamaki24]

I burdened myself with someone's voice, and I listened that was my choice. My heart gave tears as I listened to their story, but didn't see the danger that laid before me. Further and further my mind was entangled, my body and soul could move but my spirit was being strangled. I blinded myself for she was my joy's release, but in her I found no peace. I opened my heart like a student in a library, she said she did too, oh but on the contrary. I traveled a great distance to be in her presence, my motivation for this journey was in her lies essence. When I went, I traveled alone, but when I came she followed me home. A fight broke out between her and my brother's girlfriend, Oh God when will they stop arguing! I stood against all reason and odds, as we both left the home with grin-filled nods. Boy was I wrong; what have I gotten myself into, we shouldn't even be together; it was never meant to- Be that as it may I can't dwell on the past, just like a five minute "Brawl" match; this pain too will not last. So it's not so much about the "Power of Love," but about how much of YOUR POWER you're going to give to love.

[RyukiMasamune]

Loved it.

=)

[Undead Sk8er]

Well this is amazing. This is really good. I mean it was very touching and heartbreaking. so on a scale of 1 to 10 i'd give it an 13 cause that is really good.:cool::cool::cool::cool::cool:
Keep up the good work

[Nintendogirl456]

Pretty cool! Keep up the good work! =D

[McAsh]

3 words: I REALLY like it!

[setokaiba]

I loved it ^-^

[nimhuzamaki24]

Thanks everyone! :D I leraned that I can't sit down and think what to write. I found that constrains......<.< e.e 0.0 nice wordage, lol. But if just randomly say a sentence with as much emotions as I can in my mind, and just write it, and add more and more to it. both this and "Is it over? maybe...." both were the same. random sentence, adding, and in the end both become personal, like mental therapy.