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Re: Galaxy of Bonds: Book One - 07-02-09

I wanna stop here to thank two amazing people right now. "Teawee" and "ZeroN92" both are big fan of Galaxy and I wouldn't have gone this if it had not been for them. And to a third person for giving me back my courage to write in the forums again, "nintendoman101." Just thanks for everything. I'll be back with more in the near future. Til then, "Read Happy!"
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Re: Galaxy of Bonds: Book One - 07-11-09

Chapter Nine: A New Reason for Training!

~It's been a while since Luigi's encounter with Mario. Training with Goku in the Hyperbolic Time Chamber isn't easy, but....~

*chi blasts flying everywhere*

Goku: You've gotten quicker, but you have to fight in order to win, Luigi.
Luigi: Ok, try this on for size, KYAA! *rushes Goku, blocking blast after blast. he closes in and connects with a punch*

Goku: Whoa!
Luigi: Heh, heh.

*the two burst into a fury of puches, kicks, blocks and dodges. each attack causing massive tremors*

Goku; Good. Keep it up!
Luigi: Rrrraaahhhhh! *speed increases, strength doubles* Hyyaaa, hu, hu, Kyah!
Goku: Ok, that's enough..

*Luigi still fights*

Goku: Ugh.., *takes few hits* I said ENOUGH!!!! *counters his attacks by throwing him to the ground*
Luigi: *hitting ground with great force* Ugh...., so....,sorry..... *pants, pants*......
Goku: *something strikes his chi* Ugh!!
Luigi: *looking at Goku's shock stricken face* What's wrong?
Goku: Huh? Oh nothing. *gives a smile* It's been a year of training, but we have one more to go. Think you can handle it?
Luigi: }Mario needs to be stopped, but am I strong enough to do it?{ *looking at Goku with determination* Yes, I am.
Goko: Good. Your real training starts tomorrow.

Elsewhere, Orochimaru prepares Mario for a "Test Run"

Orochimaru: Ok, then Mario. From now on, you will go by a new name. Simply put, "Maru".
Maru: What is my next mission, Master?
Orochimaru: I want tosee if you can really be trusted. Go to the nearby village and destroy everything and everyone.
Maru: What is the name of the village, Master?
Orochimaru:....heheheh..*snickering* Kokiri Village.

-To Be Continued-


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Re: Galaxy of Bonds: Book One - 07-23-09

Chapter Ten: Destruction of the Kokiri Village!!
Orochimaru and Maru stand at the Sound Village's gates, Maru preparing to set out on his mission

Orochimaru: Remember, everything must be wiped out.
Maru: Don't worry. When I'm done with that village, the only thing left moving will be the wind.
Orochimaru: Good to hear. It's a three day walk, I want you back here in six days. Do not waste my time, I bore easily.
Maru: Six days? *a smug look sets on his face* I'll be back in four days, heh, heh. *off he goes....., out of sight now*

*a strange figure in dark, hooded clothing, approaches him from the side*

Orochimaru: I want you to follow him. I don't need anymore traitors around me. *looking at speachless figure*

????: Yes, sir. *setting off behind Maru*

Orochimaru: Oh, and one more thing....Kabuto. The only reason I haven't killed you yet, is because, though you try, you don't pose a threat to my life. But do know once I see you as such, I will not hesitate to kill you on the spot, understand?

Kabuto: *without turning back* Yes, Lord Orochimaru.

*traveling to the same area, Lucario and his small band of troops are still in search of the elusive Mario*

Choji: Oh man, I straving.... I need food....
Boswer: You have been complaining the whole time since we left, shut up and put a Goomba in it!
Choji: Hey! Lizard lips....
Bowser: Lizard lips?! Thats's it!

*Lucario get frustrated at the two bickering group members*

Lucario: *uses Roar, stopping both in their tracks* Enough!!!! You're like two babies.
Hinata: Lucario, when will we rest, I, I, just wanted to know.
Lucario: We'll get there soon enough! *he blows off at her, unintentionally* I'm sorry....I didn't mean to yell....., listen Kokiri Village is a two day walk from here, so let's set up camp here.
Sakura: Yeah, that sounds good.

*atop Korrin's Tower, Sonic, Shadow and Mew arrive*

Sonic: *breathing heavily* Holy chillidogs....I'm the fastest on the ground, but when you throw in climbing.....WHY IS THIS PLACE SO HIGH!!!!
Shadow: Stop complaining. We're here now.

*just then the doors to the Hyperbolic Time Chamber opens to reveal a battle damaged Goku*

Mew:Goku, we've come for your help. Mario is missing and he has caused much trouble so far...

*interrupted by a distinct voice*

Luigi: *walking out from behind Goku* Mario...., where is he. We gotta score to settle. *just then he senses Mario's chi* Mario! *the muscle covered Luigi clenches his fists* I'm coming for you! *his chi burst into an outrage, he blasts off in the direction of is killer.
Goku: Wait! *follows behind him*
Sonic:........, Now what?
Shadow: Stupid, we follow! *he and Mew jump down off the tower*
Sonic: Great....., *sighs* wait up! *he follows*


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