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pokemon sky adventures - 08-10-09

it was a normal day for shaymin in her garden planting flowers smelling flowers even talking to flowers
She just woked up from her nap
(yawning)
"well time to check on the garden" she said walking to the garden (sniff sniff)
"the flowers smell good in the morning" shaymin said smelling them
"..got .to go"
"whats that" she said feeling like she wasn't alone
"OWWWWWWW"
she screamed as a mew fell on her
"GOT TO PEE!!!!" he said outloud
NO IM NOT A BUSH IM NOT A BUSH!!!!!!
she yelled as yellow water fell on her
"ahhhhhhh" mew sighed in relief
"MEW GET OFF" shaymin yelled about to vomit as yell water ran down her face
"SHAYMIN WHY ARE YOU UNDER ME" he screamed embarrassed
"WHY ARE YOU ON TOP OF ME AND WORST OF ALL PEEING"
she screamed at the pink cat pokemon
"i thought you was a bush sorry" mew said sadly
"SORRY DO YOU KNOW HOW LONG IT WILL TAKE TO GET THIS SMELL OFF OF ME HOURS IN THE LAKE"
she yelled at mew
she noticed he was about to cry "fine just dont let it happen again ok"
she said trying not to upset him more
"ok!!!!!"
he yelled happy
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meanwhile in the lake
"how much longer do i have to scrub your back"
mew complained
"until the smell is gone"
she told him
"awwwww"
"no please dont tell me it is who i think it is" shaymin said worried
"yep its me" the voice came from behind them floating was the emotion pokemon mesprit
"how is the couple doing" mesprit said as she giggled
"WE AREN'T A COUPLE"
they both yeld blushing alittle
"aww dont lie i can sense love from yall" mesprit said circling around them
"MESPRIT!!!" came the voice of azelf
"mesprit you are suppose to be cleaning my cave"
he was not happy from her taking a break so soon
"you dont control me" she said sarcastic
"no but i am the being of willpower and i control you now come"
he said grading her ear dragging her
"where have i seen this before" mew said about the ear pulling
"shaymin do you think mesprit said was true"
mew asked shaymin still scrubbing her back
"of course not she always mess with peoples heads" shaymin said surprised mew said that
ok he said disapointed
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"ok thats enough scrubbing"
shaymin said when the smell was gone
"thank goodness" mew said his hands red
"ahhhhh" shaymin said shaking the water off of her
"i have to say you did a great job i could never reach that spot by myself" shaymin said happy to be so clean
"your welcome mew" said happy to see shaymin happy after the
peeing on her
"so what do you want to do mew" shaymin asked mew
"what you still want to hang out with me" mew said surprised
"yeah i can't be mad forever and you are the only one to visit me" she said smiling
"how about something dirty" mew said with a evil grin
"OHHHH NO I DONT LIKE YOU THAT MUCH" she said surprised mew would say that
"what do you not want to prank mewtwo"
mew said upset
"ohhh i thought you meant ..."
shaymin said knowing what he ment
"it what" mew said confused
"doing it ..." shaymin said quietly
"why did you think that" mew said blood red
"oh nothing let me get ready" shaymin said going to a gracida flower changing to sky form
"lets go prank mewtwo" she said giggling
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they were both flying over vast oceans to the kento region
"mew what prank do you have in mind"
shaymin said flying next to mew
"we are going to mess up his test tubes in his lab and make them explode"
mew said with a grin
"oh i like the idea"
shaymin said also grinning
they soon reached the cave after more travel
they walked in to find mewtwo not here
"hurry lets get to the lab"
mew said pulling shaymins arm
they reached the huge lab and walked to the test tube table
"lets see" mew said looking though tubes
"warning do mix with plasma" mew said outloud to shaymin "ok lets switch the tubes" shaymin said switching the tubes
"ok mew do you have the webcam" you bet mew said holding a webcam
"ok hide it so we can leave and watch from the garden"
ok mew said putting it in a dark cornor facing the table
"oh no i sense mewtwo" mew said worried the would get caught "shaymin take my hand i will teloport us to the garden" mew said as shaymin held his hand blushing
meanwhile at the garden mew and shaymin appeared in front of a computer
"ok let me link it and done"
mew said as he and shaymin watched as mewtwo poured the substance in to plasma
what booooooooom
mewtwo was black
hahahaha!!!!!!!
mew and shaymin were laughing there heads of lying down
MEWWWWWWW
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a angry mewtwo appeared in front of the two laughing legends I KNOW YOU WOULD DO THIS MEW BUT SHAYMIN TO I AM GOING TO REPORT TO ARCEUS AND SHE WILL MAKE YOU BOTH BUILD MY CAVE BACK BY HAND!!! mewtwo screamed and anger
shaymin was not handling get yelled at and a tear fell down her face mew saw this
"mewtwo shaymin didn't do it i did don't punish shaymin" mew begged mewtwo
"FINE BUT YOU ARE COMING WITH ME!!!!" mewtwo screamed dragging mew on the ground
shaymin was surprised mew stood up for her like that she started having feelings for mew
later on that night
mew returned tired and
achy from the anger from arceus and building mewtwo a new cave
"ahhhhhhh i am tired" hey said laying on a flower patch
"mew" shaymin said next to him
"shaymin you should have seen arceus blow up like how she did "it was scary but the sametime funny" mew said looking at her face she was blushing alittle
"why did you stand up for me" she asked blushing more getting closer to mew
"because i didn't want you to get in trouble to many stuff happened to you today"
he blushed as shaymin was inches away from his face
"thank you mew" she said kissing him mew was so shocked his tail stood straight in the air several seconds later shaymin pulled away both faces blood red and hot
"shaymin why did you kiss me" mew said still shocked
"to show my gratitude" shaymin said laying her head on his stomach
"thanks shaymin" mew said rubbing her
after minutes of no response mew looked at shaymin she was asleep
mew smiled holding putting her down next to him putting a arm around her and then feel to sleep
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mew woke up with shaymin at his face
"good mornin handsome" she said kissing mew
"good morning beautiful" he said kissing her back
"see i never wrong" they both turned around seeing mesprit
"i guess so"
shaymin said kissing mew again
"even after it happened" they both looked at her confused "what happened"
"i will tell you later arceus has called for a meeting" she said circling around the lovers
and then they were teloported to the hall of origin meetin room
"i brought them Arceus" mesprit said taking a seat beside azelf and uxie
" good thanks mesprit shaymin mew take a seat"
mew and shaymin sat up in front of the room
"what is the meeting for" palkia asked
"maybe mew got in trouble again" dialga told palkia
"i heard that" mew said only a few feet away
"ok does anyone know why we are here expect mesprit uxie and azelf" no one responsed ok as you all know mating is forbided and is not acceptle someone here broke that rule" arceus said with a stern voice
everyone was shocked at the news
expect uxie mesprit and azelf
"so anyway i just wanted to know so you are all free to go" arceus said as everyone expect uxie azelf and mesprit walked up to arceus
"should we tell them"
mesprit asked arceus
"i think it will be best shaymin mew come here" arceus said as mew and shaymin walked up
"do you know why i called you two up here"
arceus said as shaymin and mew shook there heads
"because shaymin is pregnant"
arceus said as shaymin and mews face went pale
"WHAT!!!!!!" they both said shocked
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"but we dont remember mating" they both said shocked
"because you guys did it in your sleep" mesprit said as her uxie and azelf giggled a little
"arceus are we in trouble"
mew asked arceus not being so embarrassed in his life
a few minutes pasted as arceus thinked
"no you guys are not in trouble"
"why!!" mew and shaymin asked surprised
"because you were asleep and didn't know about it but i suspect you two will take care of the baby"
arceus said in a clam voice
"ok we will" they both said smiling
"good" arceus also smiled
later that day in the garden
"YAHHHHHHHHH I GET TO BE A DAD"
mew said dancing in the air
shaymin was rubbing her stomach
"mew" shaymin asked and mew flow over to her
"yes wife" mew said happy
"what should we name our baby" shaymin asked mew
"how about shaymew" he said to shaymin
"ok i like it" she said kissing
mew
"well its time to sleep" shaymin said to mew as the laid beside each other
"i love you shaymin" mew told her putting his head next to hers "i love you to mew"
shaymin replied as she looked at his eyes
"good night mew"
she said putting an arm around him closing her eyes
mew looked and saw how cute she was sleeping he then put a arm around shaymin
"..good night my love" he said smiling and falling asleep
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three months has gone by and it happened shaymin is moody and weird cravings
MEWWWW!!!
shaymin said with a larger belly then uselessely
"yes shaymin" mew said tired
"GET ME ICE CREAM WITH A PICKLE" she yelled at him
"yes shaymin"
mew ran to the fridge and got ice cream and a pickle
"here shaymin" mew said handing her the nasty food
she throw it down i want a small pickle
sorry this is long i am making a part 2 now


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Re: pokemon sky adventures - 08-10-09

Oh wow nice touches on Mew's personality. The way it 1st asks why a Pokemon is under it lol and looking sad from being mistaken shows it's innocence and bright future as a great character.
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Re: pokemon sky adventures - 08-11-09

You do the same thing as my friend does 9.2
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haha, keep up the good work kevster :)
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Re: pokemon sky adventures - 08-11-09

Awwuh~<3
I think it's cuute~ :}
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Awwuh~<3
I think it's cuute~ :}
good pikachu drawing
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shaymin thought mew was talking about sex lolololol
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good pikachu drawing
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Lol, thankiiya~!~ x'D

Also, I loove the new part of the story~!!!
Keep up the great work~~! <3
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:rofl: !! That Shaymin sure jumped the gun there.. >.> Go Mew!
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im happy everyone likes it :D
mew is bad lolol
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