Just something I wrote.

SoSik

Tried my best, I think its time I lay my feelings to rest.
Constant pains knowing nothing will be the same.

This change hurts, only doing this so it doesn't get worst.
A lovely curse is what this is, her, my first.

Being buried alive as I strive to find myself.
I worry about you more than my own health.

Tell me what love is.
A word made up by kids?

Were we one of those kids?
Thinking of a fairy tale every time we kissed?

Has our story ended.
Book closed, but memories will stay in it.

You are my red rose.
Always told myself I'd never let you go.

I water the roses in the backyard everyday, for you.
When I'm done....I say..."I love you too".

-SoSik

KFC

Nice of you to put that poem up there some of it relates to my life.

But here is a tip with poems try not to make them rhyme alot unless its for a younger audience and focus more about expressing your message through out the poem.

But very nice attempt keep it up practice makes perfect.