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    Assassin's Creed : The Kingdom of Hearts

    Desmond, Lucy and Rebecca sat in the back of their van as Shaun drove them away from Rome. Rebecca strapped Desmond into the Animus while Lucy typed away on her computer. Once Desmond was strapped in and ready, Rebecca turned to sit in the passenger seat by Shaun, who looked at her, smirked, and turned away. Rebecca replied with an obscene hand gesture, but Shaun took no notice.

    Lucy: Ok. Desmond are you ready?
    Desmond: I always am, Lucy.
    Lucy: Great. We need you to revisit Ezio's memories. There's something that doesn't sit right...I need to confirm a theory.
    Shaun: Oh really? what theory is this?
    Lucy: (Ignoring Shaun's question) Rebecca, could you set up the Animus?
    Rebecca: Sure thing.

    Rebecca jumped out of the passenger seat as Shaun muttered to himself over how Lucy had ignored him. Rebecca kneeled by the animus and programmed it to the year 1501.

    Rebecca: Should be ready to go, Lucy.
    Lucy: Thank you, Becca. Desmond, we need you to revisit the location that Cesaré perished.
    Desmond: Why?..
    Lucy: If I'm right, you'll know... Rebecca, send him.

    Before Desmond had a chance to reply to Lucy, he was in the animus. Desmond stood patiently waiting for the animus to load his location, but nothing was happening.

    Desmond: Uh.. Lucy?
    Lucy: (From the van) Desmond, don't be alarmed, but the animus is malfunctioning..we have no control over it. We can't be sure where you'll end up, but it probably won't be Italy.
    Desmond: Great...




    I think I'll write this as a novel from now on. I think it's too complex to be scripted.
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    Re: Assasin's Creed : The Kingdom of Hearts

    I like scripts, because they are easy to follow. Though, this one would be better novel-styled.lolol? I want to start off by saying I love the atmosphere in this fanfic. It's bright, and really stylish. Rebecca is my favorite character. :3 Maybe you could explain them a little bit more? It'd be nice to have a feel on what they might look like. The only characters really with personalities now are Rebecca and Desmond, though I'm jumping the gun on this. It is just the start.

    I can't wait to see what happens next. I can't wait for the next update.

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    Re: Assasin's Creed : The Kingdom of Hearts

    Quote Originally Posted by RedRibbon View Post
    I like scripts, because they are easy to follow. Though, this one would be better novel-styled.lolol? I want to start off by saying I love the atmosphere in this fanfic. It's bright, and really stylish. Rebecca is my favorite character. :3 Maybe you could explain them a little bit more? It'd be nice to have a feel on what they might look like. The only characters really with personalities now are Rebecca and Desmond, though I'm jumping the gun on this. It is just the start.

    I can't wait to see what happens next. I can't wait for the next update.

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    You won't see much of them to start with. It will mainly be focusing on Desmond's journey within the animus. The other three will occasionally talk to him from the van, but that will be as far as their roles go for now.

    Thanks for that, I didn't catch it.

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    Back in the van, Rebecca was looking over the animus control panel, trying her best to reconfigure the settings. Shaun had put the van into auto-pilot and was now sat in the passenger seat, trying to find the cause of the malfunction through his laptop. Lucy was staring at Desmond's body, sitting in the animus. She couldn't bare the thought of losing him.
    "Lucy, I think you should take a look at this." Shaun passed his laptop over to Lucy.
    "But how?" She stared at the laptop, then turned towards Rebecca. "How can this be happening? The animus...It's loading."
    Rebecca grabbed the laptop from Lucy as they exchanged a look of horror.

    The animus loaded around Desmond. He took a quick look around, he seemed to be on a desert island.
    "Lucy, where am I?" Desmond yelled at the top of his voixe, hoping that Lucy could hear him.
    "I...Desmond, you aren't anywhere."
    Desmond couldn't get his head around Lucy's words. "What do you mean?"
    "The reading is off the scale. You appear to have been transported to another world, Desmond."
    "Great..."
    "Desmond, try looking around. If you can give us some information about where you are, we may be able to bring you back."
    "I'll try, Lucy."

    Desmond looked around the island and spotted a large tree house. He walked over to it and saw a rope ladder hanging over the side. Grabbing the ladder firmly in both hands, Desmond began to climb up. Just as he was about to reach the top of the ladder, a blue beach ball came out of nowhere and knocked against his head, causing him to lose his balance and fall to the ground.

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    Re: Assasin's Creed : The Kingdom of Hearts

    Ooh. Nice update. I wonder where he is..

    A beach ball knocked him down..?


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    Re: Assasin's Creed : The Kingdom of Hearts

    Quote Originally Posted by RedRibbon View Post
    Ooh. Nice update. I wonder where he is..

    A beach ball knocked him down..?
    Lol. It made him lose his balance. The impact didn't knock him down.

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    Ohhh, that makes sense. :D








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