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    a story

    I just wrote this down a while ago. Tell me how do you like it.

    scene 1: father's soul was capture

    Billy's house

    Billy receives a video tape from John in a mail. In the video, it shows John using a Soul Retriever Staff in front of his father and take his soul away. "Dad, what did you do to him?", said Billy. "I just took his soul and if you want his soul back then you have to enter this tournament and win against the participants", said John. "The tournament will begin you collect the seven crystals that is require to open the door to Aselria which is where the tournament will be held", said John. "But, you will have to defeat me to get back your father's soul. Each participant will need a monster in order to participate in this tournament to compete with others in a battle using monsters", said John. If you don't have a monster then you can't participate in this tournament", said John. The video has ended. "But I don't have a monster", said Billy.

    scene 2:?

    Billy get prepared to go on a journey and take his bookbag with him. Billy left the house.

    Outside

    "Hey Billy", said Steven. Billy told Steven what happen. "What's that? Your father's soul was taken by John and you need a companion monster to enter the tournament ", said Steven. "Let's go to my house and let me give you your monster", said Steven. Billy went to Steven's house.

    Steven's house

    "I have 3 monsters but I only giving you one to choose from", said Steven. (show Billy the first monster). This is Icylox(couldn't think of a better name). "He possess the power of ice" said Steven. (show Billy the second monster). "This is Kiboru. He have the power of fire", said Steven. (show Billy the last monster). "Oh, and this is Princhu. He have the power of water", said Steven. "Now choose a monster you want to travel with you as your companion" said Steven. Billy chose a monster. "I think that's a great choice. Take good care of it", said Steven.

    I couldn't think of what to write next after that.

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    Re: a story

    Sounds a lot like pokemon my brother but its all good here, you still have a great since of imagination.

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