poet of the month April

[PEGxPELVISxPETE]

poet of the month

i got the ok to revive this contest so here is, potm for april.

THEME: visually descriptive poetry
- 2 entries max per person
- all entries are final
- do not edit your entries into posts... entries MUST be in different posts, unless you're posting both at the same time
- ANY entry contained in an edited post will be disqualified
- These should be 100% by you!, all entries MUST be your own work
- of course, don't spam or flame


CHOOSING A WINNER: The winner will be decided by myself (unless i feel like participating in the contest) and no more then two other anonymous judges who did not participate in the contest.

DEADLINE: Contest will last throughout the month of April. Entries must be in by the last day of the month.

(rules stolen from brad's sig of the month)

[Yanni]

Originally Posted by PEGxPELVISxPETE

poet of the month

i got the ok to revive this contest so here is, potm for april.

THEME: visually descriptive poetry
- 2 entries max per person
- all entries are final
- do not edit your entries into posts... entries MUST be in different posts, unless you're posting both at the same time
- ANY entry contained in an edited post will be disqualified
- These should be 100% by you!, all entries MUST be your own work
- of course, don't spam or flame


CHOOSING A WINNER: The winner will be decided by myself (unless i feel like participating in the contest) and no more then two other anonymous judges who did not participate in the contest.

DEADLINE: Contest will last throughout the month of April. Entries must be in by the last day of the month.

(rules stolen from brad's sig of the month)

I am taking that there is no specified poem form huh?

I can do whatever?

[PEGxPELVISxPETE]

Originally Posted by Superperfex

I am taking that there is no specified poem form huh?

I can do whatever?

yup
no specific form for this month

[PEGxPELVISxPETE]

ok it's april, if you want to participate now would be a great time.

[fondlexmonkie]

I'm entering. I hope some other people do too though or else there's not much point in it being a competition. xD

[Fearme]

I posted this poem a while ago in the forums. Here's my first entry:


The Snowstorm

Snowflakes swirling through the air,
Chilling winds too cold to bear,
Darkness engulfing our very souls,
Unleashing a storm of demonic ghouls,
Furious winds, their anger strong,
I cover my face, for ever so long,
The cold is deadly, I’m about to freeze,
Delusions of home, mock and tease,
I can’t give up, I keep trudging on,
I’ll battle the storm until it is gone,
But the storm is relentless, I feel it inside,
The wind’s going against me, I’ll have to abide,
It whistles and it screeches, “Give up!” it said,
How much longer before I’m dead?
At last I give up, the battle is lost,
I fall to the ground, shivering in the frost,
I curl into a ball and close my eyes,
My thoughts are filled with hopeful lies.

[sk8radam1993]

Oh here it goes. Two whole lines is beast right here.
Rapping is my Hobby.
My house has a lobby.

xD stole it from Lil Wayne's I'm a Beast though.

So this was just a joke, not a real entry, I'd lose anyways.

[Pike]

Common

The Rain pours from the ominous heavens.
The Clouds devouring the crimson blue skys.
The Humidity, suffocating all those who enter.
The Shelter, poor and worn down.
The Tears, they flow like a flooding river, I drown.
The Oppression, holding me down with ropes of injustice.
The Fire, I feel it coming closer.
The Intimidation, quickly turning to fear.
The Blade, the sharpest I've ever seen.
The Chase, one against a million, the winner is uncertain.
The Blood, flowing over mine arms, and his family.
The Death, not mine, but yes, my brother's.
The Cycle, continues until the streets run red with the blood of my kin.

[Jjoiu]

Title: In the wilderness
As I walk throw the woods with my trusty sword
I notice the enchanting aroma around this forest
The bark on the trees would make a fine board
I thought as the creatures made a sensational chorus
A leaf fell down from the grand Oak
It was so old that it had many stories to tell
As I walked around I noticed a squirrel
It looked liked it just awoke
It’s eyes where as pink as a pearl
Then I remembered my journey ahead
So I rushed through forest while passing a well
The memories of that forest will always remain in my head

[Fearme]

The Answer
The answer is ahead just behind that sad closed door,
The answer is awaiting, as you patiently ignore,
But a step or two from revelation, and you're covering your eyes,
You whine and weep and stumble, as your desperate soul cries,
The answer is ahead, behind that sad closed door,
If you only take the chance , to look out and see more.