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Super Smash Bros. Brawl: Lucario and the Mystery of Nana. - 07-29-08


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I thought it might be fun to make a fanfic based on SSBB but I changed the storyline, the main characters are Lucario and Popo, however all characters will be tried to be included, I will add more as soon as I find out whether people like it or not, if you read then please try to comment, it would be most appreciated, and I'm not asking for karma, I did this for fun, its up to you whether I get karma or not, but if you wish to give karma to me, please also give some to ShadowDragon who helped me start up the storyline and did the picture that will be going up. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy the story.

Chapter 1

“Come on Nana we need to finish climbing this mountain before this day is over.”
Popo shouted. Nana was struggling to climb the mountain, she was far behind Popo. Nana soon replied;
“I’m trying! This isn’t very easy, like the mountains we climbed before!”
Popo then waited for Nana to catch up. The weather was getting worse and worse, it was starting to snow. Soon a snowstorm would whip up and attack like a raging tiger.
“Nana a blizzard is a-coming.”
Popo called worriedly to Nana. Nana indicated that she heard him and began to climb as fast as Diddy Kong when looking for bananas. As she was climbing, suddenly out of no-where a hand appeared! A great big hand! It grabbed Nana’s leg and pulled, Nana was so shocked that she didn’t even attempt to defend herself; she just clung onto her dear life on what remained of the rock she held. All Popo could do was watch as Nana was eventually dragged from her hanging place and into the humongous hands palm. After that she disappeared into the dark misty shadows of the valley.
“NANA!”
Popo cried with distress. His friend was viciously ripped away from him; it was like having some of himself die. All Popo could do was cry and despair about his stupidity and what it had cost him. Popo wiped away the tears. He had a mountain to climb, and then he would figure out what to do.

Popo finally had reached the top, he saw with amazement a floating platform! And there were some people on it, one looked kind of like a fox except it was standing on its hind legs, had pointy ears and a sharp thing protruding out of its chest and hands most of its body was blue some was black and its eyes were red.

The other person looked extremely fat. Well not extremely, but he was fat alright, he wore a yellow helmet with a big capital W, with goggles on it, along with a blue jacket and a dark blue T. Shirt. He had a very large red nose, and these googly eyes that looked really annoying. He wore brown trousers along with some brown shoes. Oh and he had a big double chin, and a really weird looking moustache to boot. He also had this vacuum thing that he was using to try and suck something out of the fox thing.

Popo thought that the fat guy was the bad one so he thought it would be nice to help the creature. He thought a nice long jump with a mid air jump followed by a belay would help get to the floating platform. He was just about to execute his in genius plan when he realized that he had one key thing missing: Nana. He couldn’t do belay without her, so he just modified his plan and instead of a belay he put in a Squall Hammer.
“That should be good enough.”
He thought.
“OK! Time to jump!”
He said to himself, then he followed up with a mid air jump and when he was near the edge he used Squall Hammer for a horizontal recovery. He was just behind the fat double chinned guy, on tip toes Popo tip toed even closer, he could smell some garlic, and the guy reeked of it. Popo raised his hammer and brought it down hard and fast on the fat double chinned man who reeked of garlic.
“OOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWW”
The fat guy groaned. He was out cold, Popo looked at the fat guy, he was drooling and dreaming of grandeur and dreaming of being rich and popular like some guy called Mario. Popo turned his sights to the creature , but something was different, all his blue was black, every trace of blue Popo had once saw disappeared, the creature looked extremely fatigued, Popo couldn’t help but feel sorry for the poor thing, it looked like it was reaching for the vacuum, Popo was just about to help it when the hand thing came out of nowhere, this time he wasn’t surprised, but what he was surprised at was Nana, in a…. cage?! Popo forgot all about the creature and sprang into action.
“BLIZZARD!”
He screamed, while he produced the ice fragments and blew as hard as he could. The ice fragments were flying, flying almost near the cage, but it was all in vain. The cage was too far away, and the hand was moving too quickly. The hand seemed to notice that the fat guy was knocked out. It quickly swiped the fat guy and the vacuum, knocking away the fox thing in the process. The creature didn’t seem happy; Popo looked at it as it stood on its weary legs. The creature half clasped his hands, just large enough for a sphere to fit inside.
“Aura Sphere!”
Popo heard this, but he didn’t see anyone open its mouth, it then struck him that the creature must be telekinetic. He saw some energy gather up into the creatures hand, blue energy, sphere shaped and very small. It threw the sphere, well not a throw; it was more of a pushing action, and the sphere began travelling quickly but the hand was too fast even for the sphere, and eventually the hand disappeared into the sky.
“NO! NO! Not again! Don’t go! NANA!”
Popo shouted, he appeared to be frustrated. All Popo could do was weep, he had failed his friend again.
“Dry your tears, my child.”
The creature commanded. Popo felt a bridge form between them; he felt the energy flow from the fox to him. A bond like this, he never experienced with anyone other than Nana.
“Who are you?”
Popo enquired.
“My name is Lucario.”
The creature replied in the most clam and soothing voice Popo had ever heard in his life…


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Re: Super Smash Bros. Brawl: Lucario and the Mystery of Nana. - 07-29-08

i had to quickly read over it because i have to go but its great !!!!
I love lucario :)
and i love how hes one of the main characters :D
nope now i had enough time to read it lol but i have to go :(
but anyways very nice!!!
i love it. thats totally me in there ^^.
im definately that lucario :D
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Brawl: Lucario and the Mystery of Nana. - 07-29-08

Thanks for posting on it, I appreciate the comment. I thought that no one would like it, I guess I was wrong:D.

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Re: Super Smash Bros. Brawl: Lucario and the Mystery of Nana. - 07-29-08

this was really fun reading. and does lucario even look like a fox lol? it was really funny when u added those details about wario too lol. really cool story so far. :)

how many chapters do u plan on making?
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Brawl: Lucario and the Mystery of Nana. - 07-29-08

It's one of the best games I ever played.It has quite a lot of differences from Super Smash Bros.Melee
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this was really fun reading. and does lucario even look like a fox lol? it was really funny when u added those details about wario too lol. really cool story so far. :)

how many chapters do u plan on making?
Hey thanks, I don't really know how many chapters I'll have, just until, at least 10 (if I can make it that far).
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Re: Super Smash Bros. Brawl: Lucario and the Mystery of Nana. - 07-29-08

Is there a Top 10 List for Super Smash Bros.Brawl?
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Hey thanks, I don't really know how many chapters I'll have, just until, at least 10 (if I can make it that far).
10 sounds like a lot of writing lol. :rofl: good luck with that.
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10 sounds like a lot of writing lol. :rofl: good luck with that.
Yeah, I might need luck, I have a nasty habit of giving up with things while I'm in the middle of things, and you're right 10 is a lot of writing. ;).
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Chapter 2

“My name is Lucario”
The creature replied.
“Who are you?”
Lucario asked.
“My name is Popo.”
He said. There was a spooky silence. Lucario still looked very fatigued. Popo looked around the scenery; there was evidence of a temple and a small civilization. Broken pillars, an altar and some other floating platforms.
“Where are we, Lucario?”
Even saying his name gave Popo strength. Lucario struggled to stand. Popo tried to help him but Lucario refused by shaking his head when Popo came close.
"We are at a place known as the Spear Pillar. It was once a thriving village and an amazing temple, when one day, the clouds darkened and mankind was about to fall. The people worshipped the Legendary pokemon, Dialga and Palkia. The temple was very sacred and only the trusted could enter its walls. Then the day I call the day of the Fall, the temple and all living inside along with the platform, were lifted, lifted high up into the sky. Out of Palkia’s hands. Being unable to cope with the sudden change, the people taken soon died, the temple was eroded, the pillars fell, and only I, the sole guardian of the Spear Pillar remain."
The explanation was long and complicated, but in the end Popo understood.
"What is you’re story, child?"
“I lived in a village, based in an icy mountain range, Nana was my best friend, together we honed our skills at climbing for years. And today as you saw she was kidnapped. I must find her. Oh and I must ask you a question, the first time I saw you, you were a very radiant blue, now you are a dull black tell me what happened?”
Popo asked.
“You see child, I use this ability known as aura, anyone can channel their aura, but as it’s my nature to use aura I will be more talented than lets say you. Aura is the channelling of energy in ones body; it gives you special abilities that otherwise you would not be able to use. If I can use my aura my body is a bright blue…”
He trailed off at the end; it felt very grim as he was speaking. Popo felt like he was going through the exact same trouble as he was. There was finally a light at the end of this tunnel. Popo got to grips with what he was saying.
“So that vacuum… Took you’re aura?!”
Popo asked despairingly.
“Yes, I’m afraid so. Without my aura, I am not complete. I’m like one half of a whole.”
He said bluntly. Popo was right! Lucario was going through the same thing as him.
“Why did they want you’re aura?”
Popo enquired
“Aura is very powerful child. They will most likely use it for evil causes, to power an insanely powerful weapon.”
Lucario replied. A short pause came, and then the Sun rose in South. The two looked to the North and saw unexplored grassy land. And a great big toadstool.
“Lucario. We have both lost something. We both have something to gain. I will be you’re half, if you will be mine?”
Popo asked with his first smile in a long time. Lucario nodded his head. And together the duo ran, even though they were tired, they gave each other strength, as long as they had hope, they would never give up. Never.

(Yeah this stuff may be a whole bunch of boring speech but its necessary).


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