Super Smash Bros. A.P.E.X.

[Wolfie456]

thats good stuff
^^ i like reading it

[Hiroko]

Hooray! People like it!

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Samus: Input password.
*types in a set of numbers*
(The Comp. logs in)
I'm going to need my Suit, please.
Sheik: Don't use "please" with a computer. They don't understand "please", anyway.
Samus: Hey, I'm being careful--
(The Comp. shuts off.)
Sheik: Intercom!
Intercom Personnel: Yes, ma'am!
Sheik: Our Computer has crashed. We're going to need a new installment.
Personnel: Yes.
...You just got that Computer a month ago!
Sheik: Our computers always seem to break quickly.
Personnel: ...Okay. *turns intercom off*
(Outside, in the main lobby, Snake and Cpt. Falcon are looking around.)
Cpt. Falcon: Now, Snake, we need to make sure no one recognizes us.
Snake: How do you figure THAT?
Cpt. Falcon: (This idiot has been so restless since we thought of this. He just want to see Samus.)
Okay, I'll go to the front desk...
EXCUSE ME!
Girl at Desk: AHH! Oh, I'm sorry. So, what did you need?
Cpt. Falcon: I would like to know where the member Sheik is. I need her for a mission.
Girl: The mission, sir?
Cpt. Falcon: That is confidential, I'm sorry.
Girl: OH, I see!! Up the back stairway, the last room in the 2nd hallway.
Cpt. Falcon: ...
Okay, I got it down! Thank you!
Girl: You're--
(Cpt. Falcon and Snake run off.)
Welcome?
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(Sheik is in a computer lab.)
Sheik: So, what do you say?
Marth: ...
Sheik: Please answer today.
Marth: No, thank you.
Sheik: Oh, so decided?
Marth: I can not tell you why, but what I know is this: I decline.
Sheik: Weren't you close friends with Ike? You two could kiss and make up this way.
Marth: *smiles* It is an honor to receive this invitation from such a respected member, but I'm sorry.
Sheik: ...It's your thing. Thanks for replying so nicely. *cocks head*
Marth: *smiles again and disconnects*
Sheik: Maybe he, too, has feelings for Lyn? I doubt.
*walks out*
(At Cpt. Falcon and Snake...)
Cpt. Falcon: Come on, Snake! It's just down this hallway.
Snake: But what if someone recognizes us--
*pulls Cpt. Falcon behind a corner*
Sheik: Oh, well. I hope we recuit some new members soon.
Snake: *pulls out the box and stuff himself and Cpt. Falcon inside*
Cpt. *whispers* THERE'S NO ROOM!
Snake: *whispers* TOO BAD! I HEARD SOMEONE!
Sheik: Huh?...
*walks near the box* I thought I heard...
Samus: Sheik! Sheik! The computer is online!
Sheik: Alright! I'm coming! *walks off*
Snake: *removes box*
Cpt. Falcon: *does nothing*
Snake: Her butt is way out of your league.
Cpt. Falcon: Did you mean Sheik, or...
Snake: Never mind! Get close to the door.
(They put their ears to the door. Snake, however, sees a hole in the door and proceeds to look through it.)
Snake: Hey...
Samus: Okay, let's try it out.
Cpt. Falcon: (NO! Snake can see those babes... *cries*)
Samus: ...Okay, it's working. Power Suit activate!
Snake: Power Suit?... *crouches to look up*
(The Power Suit is fit onto Samus. Samus taker her helmet off for the moment.)
It works like a charm.
Snake: *falls down, gets up, hesistates, and runs out*
Cpt. Falcon: HEY! COME- Oops. *runs out*
Sheik: Was that Captain... Hmm.
(Outside the HQ...)
Snake: You mean all this time...I was ridiculing the woman I... SIGH!
Then, I went and stepped on her head...NOOO!!
Cpt. Falcon: Calm down, calm down. Everyone tried to tell you!
Snake: What should I do?? Apologize? Send a card and candy??
Cpt. Falcon: It's not that bad, man. Just attack her like you always do in our next battle.
*beep beep*
Snake: *presses button on belt* Snake speaking.
Person: Snake. Is Captain Falcon there with you?
Snake: Yes.
Person: Good. We need you two to come to DL headquaters immediately.
Snake: Fine. We'll be there in a moment.
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[Neos]

they're really good karma* but i have some questions:
1)what is dl and o.f?
2)why zelda and sheik are different characters?

[Hiroko]

Originally Posted by Neos

they're really good karma* but i have some questions:
1)what is dl and o.f?
2)why zelda and sheik are different characters?

Thank you lots!

Anyway,
1. ...Let me post the Prologue for you.

The world you see in front of you is a world where the greatest fighters collect. A world of no name, this world in itself is composed of many worlds.
Each fighter fights for their own reasons. Each fighter has his or her own unique abilities amongst the others. But a few of these fighters are exceptional in both their strengths and weaknesses.
Many years ago, there was a few who felt that the champions deserved some greater power. Thus, these few gave what they had and startd a legend in this magnificent world: simply called the Orginization of Fighters. Only the top fighters were invited and, over time, the O.F., as it is usually called, became the pinnacle of the world's order and the envy of several fighters.
After time passed, no one would believe that the O.F. would go so long without rivalry. But, not long ago, it happened: the ruthless Dudgeon League, or the DL, was formed as competition for the O.F. The DL is made of merciless, ruffian fighters, and its name suits it well: the Dudgeon League causes nothing but trouble for O.F. members and regular brawlers alike. Since the Dudgeon League was formed, it and the O.F. have stood as hated rivals...
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2. I've always like to think that, because Zelda and Sheik are so varied frome each other, that it would not be extremely out of place for them to be separate beings. It just adds to the intrigue.

[Kayzee]

This is nice! I can't wait to see how my mains are portrayed in the fic.

[Hiroko]

Next post, next post.


Here's where the story really begins, I say.
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(The DL Manager is speaking over a large LCD on the wall. Fighters and staff are all sitting in a small "auditorium" of sorts.)
Leader: Welcome, my loyal members. I have gathered you all here today for a very important matter.
We have gotten a very good proposition from the Ancient Minister, the leader of Subspace himself!
Crowd: *cheers*
Leader: Their rift has not cause any harm to us, but now the Ancient Minister has sent me a notice:
To all DL members and staff:
We have considered allying with your organization, the Dudgeon League. The Subspace Army and its leader are interested in your world, and we are planning an inspection of this world: We want to call it 'home.' With your support, we will gain ground here, and we also have some benefit of it for you: the Army will give both great financial and military support.
What do you say?
Ancient Minister
Crowd: *YES!, cheers, ad lib*
Leader: We have agreed to join with the Subspace Army!!
(The crowd of members goes wild with cheers and excitement. Snake, however, stands still.)
Snake: I don't know... It sounds fishy.
Cpt. Falcon: What do you mean?
Snake: Come on, the Subspace Army?...
Leader: And, something also important! The Ancient Minister and I discussed some terms, with this special conversation in general:
[L: How can we say no?
AM: Ah, yes. We have heard of the struggle between the DL and the Organization of Fighters.
L: Yes... The pigs.
AM: I believe we can help. We can help the DL to the ground and make the DL the greatest organization.
L: ...What's in it for you?
AM: We will both gain power this way, don't you think?
L: ...Not only that, but the sheer thought of humiliating that accursed O.F. would bring the DL nothing but pride and joy!
AM: Then... Do we have a deal?
L: You can count on it!]
(In the crowd...)
Snake: WHAT?!
Cpt. Falcon: Snake! What's gotten into you?
Snake: I... I can't deal with this. *storms out*
Cpt. Falcon: Hey, wait! Follows him*
(It's a starry night. Snake is sitting outside on a bench, trying to clear his mind.)
Snake: ...
Cpt. Falcon: Pant pant... I found you... Pant...
Snake: ...Yeah...
Cpt. Falcon: Snake. *sits down* What's wrong lately?
You've been acting strange since we saw Sheik and Samus last.
Snake: I don't know. But I don't like what I heard in there.
Cpt. Falcon: It is strange, but what can you do?--
Snake: Leave. *stands up*
Cpt. Falcon: What? WHAT? You can't be serious!
Snake: Almost as serious as I can be.
Think about it. It's obvious that pairing with them just means taking over our world and its battles. The DL can get low, but this is LOW. Very LOW.
Cpt. Falcon: *thinking about it* Continue.
Snake: And we all know what the DL wants- to defeat and take down the O.F. It'll stop at nothing, not even killing the O.F. members if they don't move to the DL.
Cpt. Falcon: True...
Oh, I get it. You're not REALLY worried about the O.F.
Snake: What--
Cpt. Falcon: What you really want is for Samus to be safe from them!
Snake: ...
Cpt. Falcon: *looks to the sky* I understand your odd attitude now... You've verged from 'like' to 'love'.
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[Shivam]

Ooooohhh interesting! I love it again :)

[Hiroko]

We'll start off with Snake, but it won't stay on him like last post.
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(At Smashville, Snake is visiting Resetti for some advice.)
Resetti: And THERE'S where your problem begins! You gotta tell 'er how you feel!
Snake: I can't do that.
Resetti: Why, Sheik?
Snake: Partly, yes. Sheik doesn't trust me at all.
Resetti: Maybe I should talk to her.
But you should figure out what you want to do, alright?
Snake: Okay-
Resetti: Now SCRAM!
Snake: *flies off screen*
(At the O.F. HQ...)
Cpt. Falcon: Late... That's SO unlike Snake...
Snake: Arrrgh... I'm here. Did you remove our files?
Cpt. Falcon: Yessir.
Snake: Good. Let's advance.
(They walk up to the front desk. Sheik walks out from a corner and sees them; Sheik ducks back.)
Sheik: *watching*
Cpt. Falcon: Excuse me--
Girl: Oh, it's you! The funny man!
Cpt. Falcon: ...Yeah... Well, my partner and I were looking for a fighter opening.
Girl: Oh, sure! We're always looking for new...
Sheik: (What did he--That's ridiculous.)
Girl: So, why did you decide to leave the DL?
Snake: That's confidential.
Girl: "That's"- Ohhhhhhhhh! I get it.
Snake: Yeah, so if you'll direct us to the-
Sheik: *walks out* That would be me.
Snake and Cpt. Falcon: AAAAAAHHH!
Sheik: I'll take it from here, Marie.
Marie (Girl): Yes, ma'am! *opens a magazine*
Sheik: You boys were needing to be tested?
Cpt. Falcon: *infatuated* Y-Yes! Wait, you're the official tester?!
Sheik: And why wouldn't I be?
Snake: ...
Cpt. Falcon: Great! I'll go first!
(Out on Battlefield, Sheik is preparing to test Cpt. Falcon. Snake is the only spectator.)
Sheik: Today I'll be rating you based on performance, technique, and hit percentage. How much damage you give as opposed to how much you take will also affect your score. With enough points, you will be passed into the O.F. Do not hold back.
Cpt. Falcon: Aaaaah!~ Yes, ma'am, Shiek, ma'am!
Sheik: Let's just get this over with.
Oh, and another thing: You'll be given two, I repeat, TWO Smash Balls for this ten-man battle. Use at your own risk.
Cpt. Falcon: You got it!
Snake: 3...2..1...Go.
(The battle begins.
About five minutes pass. Sheik has six lives left compared to Cpt. Falcon's three.)
Cpt. Falcon: Frustrating! How will I beat you!
Sheik: That's where you're wrong. The goal is to impress me, not beat me entirely.
...Plus, beating me is nearly impossible at YOUR level.
Cpt. Falcon: ...
She insulted me!!
*uses a Smash Ball in his anger and misses*
Sheik: Tsk tsk. *barrages Cpt. Falcon*
Sheik: Five.
Cpt. Falcon:
Sheik: Four......Three......Two......
*smashes* One. *Stands still*
Samus: *on top of the bleachers* Time's up.
Snake: *looks up* (S-Samus! Ohhh! What should I say? Or, or, maybe I should just sit here and look cool. Yeah.) *sits there, looking cool*
Samus: Alright, Cpt. Falcon. *receives results from Sheik* I'll process these and you'll get your results after Snake is finished!
*sits down at the top of the bleachers*
Three...Two...One...GO!
(The battle begins, and Sheik attacks Snake relentlessly, ferociously, and mercilessly.)
Cpt. Falcon: Wow, she really isn't cutting him any slack!
Samus: Indeed. What's her beef?
(Sheik has used both her Smash Balls and takes one from Snake after about three minutes.)
Cpt. Falcon: Whoa! Samus, is that fair?
Samus: There is nothing that says she can't...
(The battle is detemined three minutes later, for a total of six minutes.)
Sheik: *pant* Okay, then. *jots stuff down and draws a large circle* (You are so failing.)
Samus: *peeks at review sheet* Uh-uh, Sheik. No.
Sheik: Hey, I-
Samus: *speaks lowly* You must have something against Snake to be giving him such a low score. He did much better than this.
Sheik: I have my right to-
Samus: Sheik, this is unauthorized, and you know it.
Sheik: ...Fine, you win. I'm pretty sure you can edit this out, so do what you must. *pats Samus on the back*
Samus: *chuckles* Yes, ma'am.
You two, come with me.
(They all walk to the HQ.)
Samus: Wait outside. (The two women walk in.)
Cpt. Falcon: *leans over to Snake* Sheik has the walk.
Snake: Quiet.
(Inside the room...)
Samus: *grabs print-out* Yep. They both pass.
See for yourself. *shows Sheik*
Sheik: *reads* It would seem so. *sigh*
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Whoop, I left it on a short note. Oh, well. You'll be fine.

[Shivam]

:O Resetti, I hate Resetti, especially in Brawl! Oh and I like itttt!

[Wolfie456]

i still wonder when sonic is coming in
but this is still extremely great
the way you wrote it
it could almost be a movie script