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Pokemon:the Adventure of Jake! - 08-05-08

This is a story about a begining trainer Jake and his adventure there shinnoh with his friend bren.


Prologue-
Today is Jake's birthday. he is know officaly old enough to become a trainer and leave home and start his pokemon adventure! he lives at the pokemon adcademy in Sandgem town which is conacted to prof. rowan's lab. his mom and dad live inTwinleaf town.

Chapter 1 a new begining-
Jake sleeps sound asleep in his bed till he hears the alarm from his chatot clock go off. Time to wake up Jake. Time to wake up NOW. scream the clock. 10 o'clock already? wondered Jake yawning. Jake then rember today was his birthday.Yes i almost forgot today is my brithday! Today i take my test get my pokemon and i can say smell you later to this dump!
Jake ran to the cafateria' to eat breakfast as fast as he can so he can get to the testing gym as fast as he can. Jake entered the cafateria' to see that it was preaty busy as always. Hi Gertrude. said Jake to the cafateria' lady. Hi Jake,today you take your test,right? Yea today i do, i'll take toast banna and a bowl of ranger loops. Here you go Jake. Gertrude handed Jake his food. Thanks.said Jake running to sit with his bestfriend Bren at their table they always sit at.
Sup bren.said Jake. Sup Jake.said bren. So Bren you think your gonna As' your test? Of course i am i'm the smartest in the class and have experince from watching my dad.said Bren. Very true Bren,while see you later my test is at 10:20.Said Jake You better hury cause its 10:18 right now. Whatttt its 10:18 cya.said Jake running as fast as he oculd to make it.


Chapter2 OH Sheet I'm not gonna make it!-
Oh sheet if i'm late i aam late i am gonna fail.said Jake in his mind to him self. Jake ran down the hall and made a left and went up to the steps to the second floor and made a right. Yes i am gonna make i see the door. Jake ran as fast as he can till he ran into his crush Alyssa. Bump went as the two collided. Oh sorry Alyssa.said Jake blushingly. Its ok Jake its my fault not yours.said Alyssa. Well got to go take my test. said Jake helping Alyssa up. Do good on it Jake!said Alyssa.
Jake ran into the Gym with one second to spair. I Made it.said Jake hufing and puffing.
In Came his test giver Palmer the tower tycoon. Hello you must be Jake. Yea i am jake.
Ok Jake you ready for your test?asked Palmer. Yea i am!said Jake. OK the test is three parts.
Stratagy,your knowledge of pokemon,and battleing,so are you ready?Said Palmer. Yea i am.Said Jake. OK so let the testing begin!screamed Palmer.

Chapter3 test 1 STRATAGY!-
OK let test number one begin.said Palmer. Ok time to play a game, i have a fire type charizard you have a grass type Bedew what should you do?
A.Switch
B.fight
C.do Hydro Cannon
D.RUNNN!
asked Palmer. I think i would do A and switch to a water type.said Jake. Correct!said Palmer. NExt question, you are walking and see an injured pokemon and your pokemon is in injured you only got one potion and the nearest pokemon center is 11 miles away,what should you do?asked palmer. I would usethe potion on my pokemon and carry the injuered one. WRONG!said Palmer.You should catch the wild pokemon use the poition on your pokemon and then heal the wild pokemon at the pokemon center.Screamed Palmer. Next question you have one pokemon left Ho-oh and your opponet has 2 left a water type and rock what move do you do.asked Palmer. Well since i have a legend i would use a flying attack followed by a thunderbolt. for the rock i would do solarbeam.
correct said palmer. Final Question,am i godo trainer?said Palmer. Well you are tower Tycoon so you must be.said Jake. WRONG! your anwser should of been you don't know since you never seen me battle,you should never of went for the bonus pionts.
you fail this one. you got to past the next two or you fail.

Chapter 4- Do you know pokemon?-
OK test number two,are you ready?!said Palmer. Yes sir!screamed Jake. OK what type is growlith?said Palmer. He is a fire type durrr.said Jake. Correcto,number two are you ready? Were are pidgy found?said Palmer. In a tree?said Jake. Correct again,your on fire!said palmer.
so jake got the next 3 wrong. if he gets this one right which is the last one for bonus pionts of 5 he pases.

Chapter 5 final question-



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Re: Pokemon:the Adventure of Jake! - 08-05-08

Jake
male
Age:15
pokemon:wait to find out
friends:Bren and Alyssa
Bio:Jake was the youngest out of 4.He had to work to be as godo as his brother. He is not as godo as his brother now but one day he wants to. He enroled in the acedemy at the age of 10 and been there for 4 years. He just turned 15 and is know able to take his test. if he fails he must wait 2 years to do it again. he is not the smartest in the class like Bren he is sorta middle but his skill is all in battleing. his crush is a girl named Alyssa/


Bren:
male
Age:14
pokemon:wait to find out
friends:Jake
Bio:His dad is gym leader at Sunnyshore Gym. His Dad taught him everything about battleing and everything. He went to the acedmy at the age of 9 the youngest anyone has ever entered. His is ahead of all his classes so he skiped a grade and went into Jake's grade. He is the smartest kid in his grade and age group. He is very cocky and wise.



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Re: Pokemon:the Adventure of Jake! - 08-05-08

Nice, I'm liking it so far lol. That Jake is a true character I can see. ;)
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Re: Pokemon:the Adventure of Jake! - 08-05-08

thanks i was hopeing you would like it.
i know there is alot of erros spelling and punctions.

i might make this into a comic.
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Re: Pokemon:the Adventure of Jake! - 08-05-08

So far looks nice hope you do more ;)
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Re: Pokemon:the Adventure of Jake! - 08-05-08

Its good! I am happy to be in it :D. Can't wait till more comes out!
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Re: Pokemon:the Adventure of Jake! - 08-05-08

Chapter 2 is up and so are bios
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Re: Pokemon:the Adventure of Jake! - 08-05-08

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Chapter 2 is up and so are bios
Wheres the bios? lol I wanna know about me =]. Oo Bren is just like me!
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