Jiliac Saga: Encounter on tatoinee (STar wars fan fic)

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THIS IS MY FIRST FAN FIC yeah comments could be helpfull

A battered up Corellian entered the Tatoinee Catina on a dreadful Monday morning. His Imperial issued boots were scuffed, his trousers torn to shreads (but there was still some of it left) and his Mandorian helmet battered up. Many people were wondering who he just attacked. As this man took off his battle equipment it became very clear that this man was indeed a bounty Hunter. This bounty hunter though, was no ordinary run of the mill bounty. He was second to none. His name was Jiliac Sortoov. Rumours have it that he grew up on Alderran but was transported by the slave trade to Corellia.

As a child Jiliac worked as a mechanic on the outskirts of the main civilization. He knew nothing about his past, about his parents or about his entire family. He knew though that there was something else out there waiting for him. When he was entering adulthood, he was informed of the Empire's destruction of Alderran. The only place where he might be able to find answers to his past life. A deep hate grew from that day and it still lasts in Jiliac today. Money was hard to find in Corellia because of his Slave status but that didn't discourage him. He decided to join what he hated, The Imperial Navy. During his service he learnt many valuable flying and combat skills which he still uses in his bounty hunting. As he progressed through the Navy, the second Deathstar was underconstruction. The Rebellion grew and he seemed to fear death so he left the imperial navy.

When he was discharged it was easy for him to find work with his piloting status. From transporting spices to defending Rebellion freighters he had done it all. Jiliac began to get tired of doing these tedious missions. After the rebellion successfully overthrew the Empire more and more bounty hunters appeared. Jiliac knew that if he kept helping out certain people he may the next target. He soon went back to tatoinee in his newly purchased TIE Fighter which was sold on the Galactic Blackmarket for a cheap price.
Jiliac also ordered new colours to be painted on the fighter which would make it much more authentic. It was now a dark and light blue which had a new quad laser blaster installed. Since the original had no shields equipped which although made it very nimble it was also very weak. The Shields slowed it down but it provided the protection Jiliac needed.

In order to make a living he decided to help out rebel forces on Tatoinee. More and more rebels from different organizations where poping up all over the Galaxy. This made it easy for him to find a job. His first target was a man named Roger Vortez. He was a male twi'lek and apparantly was able to use the force. The Rebel organization was against the New Jedi order. Jiliac got into a landspeeder he had leased for this kill and took it out all the way near the moisture farms of Tatoinee. Armed with his Sniper he took aim onto the young jedi and fired four rapid shots towards him. The Jedi jumped up into the air and sprung out his sabre looking around.

Jiliac was confused but decided to keep his stealth. The Jedi walked around wondering where the shots were fired from. Jiliac again, lined up the jedi in his sights and opened fire. The Jedi however spotted the plasma lasers and deflected them with his sabre. Jiliac was terrified. Is this the end? he spotted me! The Jedi jumped up to where jiliac was hidding. Jiliac quickly reacted and shot 4 poison darts out of his Mandorian wristlets. All four were disingtigrated in the jedi's sabre. Jiliac then quickly rolled to the side and fired more shots but this time out of his pistol which was set to stun. The jedi's reflexes were no match for him. But Suddenly out of no where, a cloaked being emerged from the shadows. The Jedi roger vortez did not notice the person behind him and Picked the bounty up using the force and threw him into the wall of rocks. Jiliac was injured. His armour all torn up.

The Being behind the Jedi ignited his lightsabre. Roger turned around and began battling him. Red and green clashed together, sparks flew. The Sith yelled as the jedi sliced his arm off. The sith now more angrier gripped the jedi with the force and choked him to death. The jedi then fell liflessly towards the ground. Jiliac emerged from the ruble and looked up at the sith who was offering his hand.

"I sense much anger in you Bounty. I need a bounty hunter, I will pay you a good price to exterminate people such as the scum jedi." he said

Jiliac knew that the sith were much more powerful then the jedi but he had to help. He needed the money.

"I will help you." Jiliac responded
"I will met you tomorrow at the tatoinee Catina"
"Yes boss" he replied.

TO BE CONTINUED

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it isbt bad i think u should put more talking of the characters not u the caracters got it ill keep reading ;)

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PART 2 ENTAGLMENT ON DAGOBAH
Later that dreadful Monday, Jiliac returned to the shipyard where droids where preparing his ship for flight. His armour suit was fully repaired. The dents were buffed out and the sand washed off. Jiliac seemed he could tackle anything. Soon his comlink began speaking it was the sith. A hologram of the Unknowned sith he had encountered earlier poped up on the comlink.

"Jiliac come in." The sith said.
"Yes my lord."
"It is time for you to carry out my mission. I am sending you to Dagobah with my apprentice. There is a jedi academy there. You may encounter jedi as high as master but I trust that you may be able to handle them."
"your ...sending your aprrentice with me?" he questioned.
"Yes you alone won't be able to handle these jedi. Take them out with your poision darts or stun them. I want at least on prisoner. I am offering up 2,000 Credits..." And with that the comlink closed.

A few minutes later, the sith apprentice stepped in. It was a human female who knew the ways of the force. Her cloaked robes covered every part of her body including her face. She looked at Jiliac.

"I take my master has contacted you?" She said with a soft voice.
"Yes he has. Your name?" he questioned. He wanted to know who this one was unlike the one that just randomly hired him.
"My name is Darth Verags. I come from Corellia."
"Corellia! I was raised there!" he exlaimed but the sith didn't seem to show any emotion.
"Is the ship ready."
"Yes it is, shall I set the course to Dagobah?"
"Yes we shall lift off immediatley."

They climed into the modified TIE fighter. Jiliac climbed in first, pushing a button and the ship began expanding a new compartment which could hold five people or 1000 pounds of cargo.
The sith then climed in and strapped herself to one of the seats. Jiliac then began entering in the coordiantes and the TIE fighter lifted off.

It was a quiet ride. Only a few passing shuttle busses that ran between two planets. Then nothing. Dagobah was such a desolate and untamed planet that no civilization could be found anywhere.

"Are you sure your master has the correct planet, I mean-"
"SILENCE you will never speak of the master ever again!" She belted into her microphone.
Jiliac took her word. He didn't want to be a victim of not being able to speak out.

The planet soon became visible. Jiliac was preparing to land the ship, but since the planet was a marshland he needed to find somewhere that would not let the ship sink.

After about 30 minutes of circling the planet Jiliac finally found a suitable landing zone. The ship finally came to a halt.

"Wait here." The sith said into her comlink. Jiliac was confused. He was given orders by "the master" to stun someone. Ignoring the apprentice's command he left the ship. His pistol set to stun, and his poison darts loaded he was ready. The sith however was already gone. She had probably leaped about 40 feet up the large trees of Dagobah. Jiliac looked on his scanner. There seemed to be an intelligent life form 50 km away from his position. Jiliac began running towards them.

When he finally got close enough he was able to find a jedi meditating near a swamp. This one is mine, he thought. He was able to take his pistol out without making to much noise. The pistol, already set on stun, was now lined up with the jedi. Jiliac fired two shots. One directly at the jedi and one to the left of him incase he tried to dodge that way. Too Jiliac's surprise the jedi actually dodged to the left and was stunned. YES! Jiliac thought. He then picked up the body and dragged it towards the ship.

When he finally made it to the ship he gave the jedi a sleeping pill and disarmed him. Jiliac was so caught up in the moment he forgot that the Sith was still on the planet. He opened his comlink and looked at the GPS tracker. It showed that the sith seemed to beheading back to the ship. Closer and closer the red dot approached. Soon it was right on top of Jiliac and the sith swung into the Ship yelling " GO GO GO!" Jiliac rushed and started the ship lifting off. The Sith began deflecting shots fired at the ship from the loading hatch. Soon they were to far into the sky and closed the hatch. The sith then looked into the holding cell. And she saw the jedi the bounty had captured.

"So... you left the ship?" She questioned.
"Yes, orders by the master. I had to capture on Jedi alive." he roared at her. "GRAB THE GUNNER SEAT! THIS IS GONNA GET ROUGH!"