Anime World

[Shivam]

Thanks, unfortunately, my school is starting so I'll be posting less. But I'll update it as I go on.

[lolwut]

IMHO you picked a horrible combination of anime. Avatar isn't even real anime, it's just a wannabe Americanised anime.

I would C&C but it'll take too long :x Let's just say... The characters don't match the personalities in their anime and there are way too many fullstops, you need to drag it on a bit and make it more exciting to read rather then just saying what's happening straight to us (ie. add description)

[Shivam]

Originally Posted by TruthWielder

IMHO you picked a horrible combination of anime. Avatar isn't even real anime, it's just a wannabe Americanised anime.

I would C&C but it'll take too long :x Let's just say... The characters don't match the personalities in their anime and there are way too many fullstops, you need to drag it on a bit and make it more exciting to read rather then just saying what's happening straight to us (ie. add description)

Ok thanks TruthWielder, I'll try to remember that as I progress =).

[Ash-Tray]

I actually liked it. I disagree with truth on this on, I think you got the personality of the characters well. Now if it was younger naruto I would agree with him, but since this is the shippdden naruto, I would believe this is the way he would act!

I hope ya keep the story going and much as ya can!

YA-HA!!!