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Anime World - 08-28-2008




NOTE: Please don't tell me my banner is rubbish, I know it is, my image editing skills are rubbish. So please don't mention to me that my banner is rubbish. Thanks.

I know that the first title bit is weird. But here it comes. I've based this on 5 or more Animes I know of. So this will have the following: Naruto, Bleach, Avatar, Errr, wheres my notebook? Oh and Tenchi in Tokyo (Sorry about that lmao, I forgot the last one). I will be adding more as soon as my advisors tell me to =D.
First of all I would like to thank the following: Ling, he encouraged me and helped me to make this. And second of all Kel. You'll see what he did later. Shower them with karma or face my wrath later =D.

Secondly: I will be posting a poll here. Please will you take time to vote on that poll what you think of the fanfic. And what else can I say? Thanks for reading.

Chapter 1: Trouble on the Horizon.

It was a normal boring day in the Leaf Village and Team 7 and Team 8 had just arrived from a mission. “Sakura-chan, wanna go out with me?” Naruto asked moving closer to Sakura. “DREAM ON!” Sakura yelled before she pushed him away. “Stop invading my personal space you stalker!” She screamed. Naruto tried to convince Sakura with his sweet talk. “Come on Sakura-chan, please, please, please, PLEASE!!” He begged. Sakura twitched a little before she punched him her superhuman strength. “Bye Naruto!” She shouted as Naruto flew through the air and landed face first with a ground shaking thud. “Ouch. Sakura-chan sure hits hard.” He muttered sadly as he wiped his dirty face. He slowly trudged home, but outside his door he saw a beautiful face. She was as pretty.. No prettier than Sakura and to Naruto she was an angel. “Hello Naruto.” She said.
“Er, yes hello. But who are you and how do you know about me?” Naruto asked stepping back and reaching for a kunai knife. The woman had brown hair green eyes and a scarf she held poshly. “Everyone has heard of you in-” She didn’t have time to finish, Naruto swiftly threw his kunai at the woman. The woman evidently had good reflexes. She blocked the kunai with her… Scarf? “What?!” Naruto asked himself. He didn’t have time to ponder how she did that because the woman was running straight up to him. “So fast!” He thought. He was about to focus chakra to his feet to dodge, just as he started to dodge, the lady grabbed the back of his jacket, forcefully made him turn around, still grabbing him. Naruto tried to escape the grip but her willpower and grip was amazing. For a moment she paused, as if gathering the chakra into her right foot. Now the woman pushed Naruto away as she slammed her foot into Naruto’s stomach with her high heel shoe, it was a very powerful kick. Naruto was wide eyed with the power. He flew off, bounced on the cold dirt and slammed straight into a metal fence, denting it while also noticing the blood oozing from his stomach and mouth. The woman walked up to him. “I would finish you off now. But that’s not part of my mission. Farewell Uzumaki Naruto. You have been cursed for life. Hahaha.” She sounded very pleased with herself. After that Naruto couldn’t remember let alone understand what was going on. He soon drifted into sleep.

“Naruto… Naruto… WAKE UP YOU LOSER!” He heard someone yell. He suddenly felt some violent shaking. Naruto opened his weary eyes. “Sakura-chan…” He mumbled as he saw Sakura at his bedside. Naruto attempted to sit up but as he sat up he suffered an internal attack. “Ugh” Was the noise he made as he slode down into his lying position. “Naruto, don’t stress your body out! We just finished healing you!” Sakura ordered. “You still have a lot of internal injuries. Especially to your stomach. And to such an extent that your chakra flow has completely been blocked. This also means that you will not be participating in missions for a long time…” “It also means that you may… Die…” She thought.
“Don’t worry remember I heal quickly. I’ll be fine in no time!” Sakura shook her head.
"REST!" She commanded. Naruto nodded slowly.

Meanwhile

“Master… I have infected the Uzumaki brat with the curse. Soon the Kyuubi will awake take control of the brat and rise to destroy the world.” The woman explained to her leader just outside the Hidden Leaf. “I see… You have done well Junko.” The man praised.
“Remember Master I live to serve you. I am but a tool at your disposal, use me as you wish.”
“Well said Junko. Let us begone, we don’t want to be discovered do we?” He replied, Junko nodded and followed her leader into the leafy forest, they soon found themselves in the Land of the Rice Fields. “Next on our list, Uchiha Sasuke. Hahahahahahaha!”


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Re: Anime World - 08-28-2008

May need this space.
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Re: Anime World - 08-28-2008

seems good so far. but umm why the avatar. i know you siad its anime you know but come on now. i would of added some dbz in their over that.

but so far its good. if you need any idea's for the next chapter just ask. and is this naruto in shupudden(misspelled) or when he is younger
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seems good so far. but umm why the avatar. i know you siad its anime you know but come on now. i would of added some dbz in their over that.

but so far its good. if you need any idea's for the next chapter just ask. and is this naruto in shupudden(misspelled) or when he is younger
Shippuden. Oh and I hate DBZ lmao.
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Good job!
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Good job!
Thanks Ling!
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Shippuden. Oh and I hate DBZ lmao.
o wow lol godo job again
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Heh. I hope people like it.
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a good story sheik and oh no naruto is badly hurt
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Re: Anime World - 09-01-2008

Where is my good friend Sokka?!

Ha, I'm joking. Excellent work so far, darling!
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