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Freedom: Part 1 - 09-19-08

When we are at school or when we are asleep they will come. We are unprepared we have no weapons. They take the adults, they leave the children. The children try save there elders to save mankind. Cause if they don’t go to war soon the aliens will come back when we are once more unaware of what is out there watching us, when we are at school or asleep. But as the cycle went on and the children stopped forgetting and live there lives as a normal person, with no adults. When this happened and they lost there elders, they were angry, they were angry at what they learned. They had learned about the never ending cycle, of how humans were treated like cattle, and they would make the aliens pay for this. But the aliens knew about the children’s discovery and they must eliminate them before they grew wiser, before they turned 18, because if they did and they gained wisdom, they could destroy them. With there paths set towards each other, there minds made they went to war. But some things must be said before I begin. The aliens never observing us closer made one fatal mistake. When a child turns 9 not 18, he or she gains wisdom, the wisdom of justice, freedom and the will to fight for his or her freedom. And the aliens did not know that they had the same chance of loosing. And won last thing. These aliens, no longer have surprise on there side, they do have something though. They have numbers. But some times strength will loose to surprise, wisdom and strategy…



Hi my name is Jake Carver. I am driving a car at the age of 13 to deliver a message to one of the many bases in San Diego, California (these bases aren’t military owned but more like child built bases, and the reason I can drive at the age of thirteen is because there are no adults to arrest me). This message will be sent threw out the world on the internet. This base contains the only access to the internet for miles and so I had to deliver it here to notify well every where, it tells of what has happened, why every living human 18 or older has gone, it tells of how we where treated like cattle and our elders where harvested like cattle last summer and sent to some distant planet for D.N.A. testing to make clones which are uncompleted and the people weak as they judged us are thrown into space and you will never see them again. It tells you that all we can do now is prepare for another blow. But this time we will be ready and we will invade them. Oh yeah you are probably wondering why they make clones and why I know all this information. Well lets start with the clones well, there planet blew up. And they moved to one that can’t support life. They just used it as a place to keep all there buildings and such that can support life. But they want to be able to go outside these they call prisons, which lead them to earth, a life supporting planet. And how do I know all this info, well you have heard of area 51 right. Well yes it is a military base, but it is not a human base but an alien base. The aliens use it as there earth tracking device, and it also is an access point to there army information. And since there are no adults to protect it, I just took my team of fighters and took a little peek. Now I am back here delivering this message. But you probably want to no what happened first. Well this is how it started…
I was on my way to school on a school bus with my friends. When we arrived we stepped out side the bus into the cold stormy morning. All I could think about is the weird way my cat acted. She kept walking near the door afraid something was going to come threw. So I got on the bus at our bus stop. We drove for fifteen minutes. Arrived. And I walked into the school grounds. My friends and I went outside into the rain before school started. When we got back into the warm gym we sat down near every body else and waited for the bell to ring indicating that it was time for school. While we waited, I thought of something that would start a conversation. And randomly I picked my odd cat as a topic. But this topic did not fail. It turns out two of my friends pets acted weird.
“Yeah my dog did the same thing”, said Ryan
“That is weird”, I said in response
“I wonder w-They bell had rung and we ran to our classes so we would not be late.
Finally the bell rang and we went to our bus hoping not to get wet. I hoped in and we drove off. I took off my back pack and sat down in a seat as the bus waited in the school traffic. I just waited and stared out the window. And that is when it started. A meteor was zooming at us at a fast pace. “Um…um guys!”
“What Jake!”
“Look!”
“Oh my god!” they shouted
“Um mister bus driver”
“Wh-


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Re: Freedom: Part 1 - 09-19-08

Umm WTF!!! :confused:
I didnt read it all but why did you make 4 of these threads
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Re: Freedom: Part 1 - 09-19-08

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Umm WTF!!! :confused:
I didnt read it all but why did you make 4 of these threads
Because there all the same story but the website wouldn't let me fit all of the words in one post. Sorry about that
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