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Freedom: Part 2 - 09-19-08

I awoke in the bus to a horrific sights, alls I could see is death. The bus had flipped over and I was standing standing light-headed in the middle of it. I looked a round and wiped blood off my face. The bus driver was dead and so were a number of kids. But none of my friends were. And they were the ones who woke me up. Me I just stared, until my self came to me and I shouted,” Be quiet” and everyone in the bus who was either screaming or crying stood up and looked at me in silence. “I know you are scared, now raise your hand if you saw the meteor. They all raised there hands. “Ok now we are going to go out side and see what happened. And I suggest you stay with us or you might get lost. We have no idea what is out there and how far our bus flew. So now I am going to go check and see what happened raise your hand if you want to go!” They all raised there hands. But under one condition. I had to go first. So I climbed out of the bus and saw the same thing as I had when I woke up. The dead lie every where. But the living where looking at something else it turns out the big meteor was only one. There where hundreds of small meteors shooting across the sky. And then landing everywhere. By now all the people had gotten out and they where looking at the horrid sight. Then all the meteors stopped. And for the first time I noticed the big hole in the land about a mile away. This hole was so big it made you feel like an ant. It made you feel like you where nothing. You had no power… And I also noticed that the bus hadn’t moved it had just flipped over and was still near the now ruined school. We all walked down the steep hill past all the used to be traffic and met. But then all of a sudden all the meteors that had fallen to the ground exploded into swarm of what looked like black locust. But then they started to head in every direction and they soon reached us. We ducked and so did every other person. They flew threw us for about 5 minutes and this gave me time to realize that those things had to be aliens. And this question made me look up at the black-locust. They were not of course black-locust. They looked more like mud. Except they were black, and none of them looked a like. They were more like un-finished dragon/mud flies. And little by little they disappeared, to go and well run away. (Now from what I learned from the base, they were supposed to but some time warp object on earth, that made us forget this ever happened. But it didn’t work and now we know everything). When we looked up the first thing I noticed is that there where no adults, just kids.
“Where are all the adults?”
“Why are there only children?”
“Ok I shouted, we are either going to whine and cry or we are going to figure this out? Now we are going to go look for a place that we can sleep to night. As you can see there are a couple of houses that are wrecked by a meteor. And now I hope you have noticed that we are going to run out of electricity fast. So here is our plan. We will go to a place were I know there is a lot of sleeping places. We will go there. Then we will make groups one will go get food, a lot of food, which will mean stealing cars, another will get all the batteries, lights, and matches they can find. Next for our protection from those things and possibly humans we will go to our houses or Wal-Mart, and any other places you can find knives, guns, and tools. For max-protection we will all at least once go on a search for weapons. Then when this is all done we will meet back at this place I know of. Oh and yeah if you have any brothers and sisters you should go and get them quick. With that said we where all asleep in that place. I had got my brother and we where sleeping in our, apartment. When I say this I mean we know this place because we used to live in it. And so we just rested knowing that we were being guarded and we were safe. The next day was a big day. We had do but fences all around the base for protection we then made the two houses both on either side of the entrance into a guard center so no one could get in. We set up gun storage in the garages. We set up lights. Each house got a car. And we were done by one o’clock. By then we had eaten lunch. And next thing you know we were making armored cars for exploring. In each of the five armored cars we tore out all the seats, except the driver seat. We then took out the window and put guns in them. And with all of this in there we still had room to put people and supplies. By the end of a day we had a base. With armored cars, guns, a fence, lighting, guarding (oh, the guards take turns every night. And if anyone came by we where to ask them if they wanted to come. Because we had many houses left over and we only had 200 people and we needed more, we all new that they would come back. And the next day we all decided that 20 of us including me would go out and explore. The first thing we looked for is people or friends we had. I found my cousin, who had been living in there house. I found my friend Dominic; I also found my dog and my cat still trapped in our un-harmed house. They were very hard to take care of over the past few months. The months went by, and we decided to make teams or squadrons. My team consisted of Me, my brother Cole, My three cousins, Dominic, Ryan, and one of my other friends whose name is Ryan, Marc, the 2 Andrews, Jacob, a enemy of mine from school who had rudely joined a month ago and thought he was the best and force fully made him self a member, this one girl whom I didn’t even know and that was it. Since I started this whole base I was given two armored vehicles. But by now the whole base had 30 of them. These armored vehicles held my whole squad.
The base was now complete. No more people could join. With this done my team decided to go on a trip threw the west to find and give info. Our plan was to go up to Las Vegas, then go to the hover dam, go to Arizona, and come back here. We estimated we would be gone a month. With all hour guns loaded, our food supply good for 3 days, we set off waving our good byes to the base and we where off. I drove the whole way and so did my cousin Kelsey drove the other car. The people in my car were my brother, my cousin Kyle, Dominic, Ryan, both Andrews, and Marc. Marc, Dominic and Andrew were on the guns. The others were sitting back and relaxing and my cousin Kyle was using the map to give us directions. After 6 hours of driving we arrived in Las Vegas. What we saw there was horrible. It looked a lot like our city but worse. One surprising thing was that there were two bases. One like ours and another one that was barely even base. The one like ours gave us gas, food and water. There base was really cool, they had armored vehicles, a gun room where all of there weapons were stored, a cafeteria, and housing. We sleep there for the night. The next mourning we were off yet again. But this trip was shorter. At the hover dam we gathered guns, and such. There were also a few vehicles but we could not take them. But if we found anyone on the way we would invite them on the way back to pick the vehicles up and bring them back. Now here is were I got that funky idea to go check out area 51. We went there found the info and stood in shock. That whole process was much longer than it sounded. But what scared us more was that well we weren’t alone in that base. The aliens were there. We tried to get out unseen but this failed and we were running for our lives towards the truck we got in drove off for a quarter of a mile and stopped. We got out got our weapons out and prepared for a fight. Some people stayed in the car with the guns. We waited and then we saw them. They were zooming at us at a fast pace. “Don’t shoot. On the count of three. 1…2…3…SHOOT!!!! It would have been cooler if you had seen it. Oh boy, were they surprised. Poof. They were gone in a mater of seconds. But this was a big mistake and we knew it. We had just let them know that we weren’t under there hypnotism. And so the war began. We drove back. And on the drive we kicked some more of E.T.’s butt. But we all knew that we had the advantage of surprise. And it would not last long.
And so here I am delivering this message. Mean while my base is preparing for war. And when I deliver this message so will every body else. Again I am in the car with my friends and my cousin and brother. When we got there we gave it to the guy. He hooked it in. And it was on the web. Being transferred to every working computer on earth. It was transferred in all languages. And it declared that as of today all of earth must unite as one! We got many responses. And the United States and the surrounding countries decided that we would go to war.


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