Ash's BIG adventure!

zpo25 · 08:28 AM

I'll stick all the parts here. If your wondering, I dreamt this story and wrote it ^.^

A 11-year old girl rushed down a path. It was a beautiful, sunny day. The sky was a Azurill blue with white, fluffly, Altaria clouds. The swallows were tweeting and it was really a lovely, summer day. Yet, Zahra didn't have time. She was late for Ash's 11 birthday party, and she was a surpise guest. 'Yep, I'll be a surpise. The only late person!' she thought. 'Um, um, UMBEROEN!' Zahra tilted her head down and around at the same time. To her left was her Umberoen, that evolved last night. 'Im so proud of you!' Zahra said as she ran like a Arcanine. 'Now, Umberoen, this 'Ash' Mum was talking about, he's supposed to be a great trainer. You can beat his 'legdanry' Pikachu, right?' The umberon shot a blast of black energy and seemed to smile. Zahra put a grin on her face. She loved that pokemon, her first. She found the injured Eevee in a trophy garden, sinnoh. She ran to a poke-centre and got the Nurse Joy to heal it. This all happened on her 10th birthday, walking to Professor Rowan's lab to get a Chimchar. She brought the Eevee with her and Rowan told her to keep it. She was happy he said that. Both trainer and pokemon. Since then Zahra had caught a shinx which is now a Luxro and a ivysaur, holding a everstone so it won't evolve. As Zahra ran to the top of the hill, she could see Halif Town beaming. 'Well, let's find out how cool this Ash is!' shouted Zahra, jumping down the hill.

*Bleep-bleep* Zahra's poketch went off as she sped thorough the quiet streets of Halif Town. As she pressed the green buttons her mum's face appeared on the screen. 'Zahra, where are you?' he mum questioned. 'Sorry, I've been busy. You see my...' 'Just hurry up. Ash is eager to meet you. He's a handsome boy you know.' interuppted Zahra's mum. 'Ugh. I don't care. Look, I am in sight of Ash's house now. I'll see you in a second.' Zahra turned off the poketch. 'Beron!' Umberoen cried. 'Yes, your right Umberoen! There is Ash's house!' Zahra placed her pokemon on her shoulder, jumped over the gate and ran into the garden. Then as she finally stopped she noticed her Umberoen run over to a Pikachu and start playing. Then a boy in a red hat picked up Umberoen and stroked it. As she saw the boy, she suddenly felt weird. A new feeling, that she enjoyed.

Zahra held a basketball coloured as a pokeball and went up to Ash, spinning the ball on her finger. 'Hi, are you Ash?' she asked. The boy turned around. 'Oh hi! Yes i am! This Umberoen yours?' Ash replied. 'Yes. Would you like to play a game of Umber-Ball?' Ash had a confused look on his face. 'Um... what?' 'It's like Basketball, but you use your pokemon. It's simple. 5 a side, the trainer team and the pokemon team. The trainers have to score points by throwing the ball in the hoop. Simple. The pokemon score by taking the ball of a trainer and running around the court once. Whatever team has the most points after 30 mins wins. It's called Umber-Ball because of my Umbereon. Even though Umberoen was a little Eevee then!'

'Cool. Hey, everyone, LET'S HAVE A POKEMON TOURNY!' Ash shouted at the top of his voice while everyone else cheered. 'The first battle can be Misty against Zahra.' 'Sure!' said both of the picked girls. Misty and Zahra placed themselves ready and Professor Oak called out the starting point. 'Gym Leader Misty Vs. Pokemon Trainer Zahra. Withdraw and battle now!' Misty held out a poke-ball and threw it. 'Go SEADRA!' she shouted. 'A water trainer... oh dear Misty!' thought Zahra as she threw a poke-ball. 'Go SOK!' she cried as a Luxro stood proud. The girls then shouted out their moves. (cyan stands for Misty, black for Zahra) Seadra, Bubble! Jump and use Iron Tail! The attack hit Seadra in the stomach, knocking it over! Now, THUNDERBOLT!!!!! The attack fainted Misty's Seadra! Zahra withdrew SOK and chose Umberoen! Misty chose Togetic! Night Shade! The attack hit Togetic full on, but is still standing! Shadow Claw! Future sight. As Umberoen was im mid-air, ready to attack, he was attacked my Future Sight! Umberoen survived the attack and knocked out Misty's Togetic!

After alot of battles the finals came. Ash VS. Zahra

'Don't go easy on me!' winked Zahra. 'Oh, I wont!' replied Ash with a grin.

(Red for ash, black for Zahra)

'Lets just use our starter pokemon.' said Ash. 'Huh?' 'Let's see whos stronger.' 'Oh, okay!' The trainers stood ready and Oak called out what they needed to know. Pikachu, I CHOOSE YOU! Lets go, UMBEROEN!

It was a long and 'bloody' battle. Pikachu skidded to a halt infront of his pressurized trainer but Zahra seemed cool. Her black-as-coal pokemon was defending well and it had learned a new move. Umbroen, use Midnight Power! Umbroen would run at the speed of a Rapidash, in a hurry, then a cloak of swirling black would cover her pokemon then attack! Like Pikachu's thunderbolt, Umbroen would shoot out most of the black power, still charging. Then it would throw itself at the victim, still trying to recover from the 'black thunderbolt' and hit the pokemon. Using this attack knocked out Pikachu.

Brock was confused. 'When Umbroen learns that move...' he muttered to himself. Dawn overheard. 'What happens?' Zahra was filled with joy. 'UMBROEN IS EVOLVING!!!' she shouted out.

Ash gasped. 'But Umbroen can't evolve...' Oak was scratching his head. 'Umbroen only evolved last night. This Umbroen is WAY ahead of all pokemon I've ever seen!' A binding, white light covered Zahra's pokemon head to toe and then a new pokemon stood in Umbroen's place. A Umbroen on 2 legs. It looked like a Lucario, but without the spikes and hair. It still had the yellow circles but they were bigger and brighter. Ash and Zahra pulled out their 'dexes. 'Umberneo, The Dark Cat Pokemon. This pokemon is believed to be a cross of Lucario and Umbroen. After learning the move 'Midnight Power' Umbroen evolves into this pokemon.' the Poke-dex blurted out. 'Hey Zahra?' Ash suddenly spoke. 'Y-y-es?' stumbled Zahra, turning bright red. 'Would you like to go on to Kanto Cave and explore with me?' Ash also turned bright red. 'Oh?' 'We are going to track down Moltres!'

Zahra felt her hands tingling. She quickly asked if she could go to the toilet. As she ran of Ash was confused. 'I'm going to do some training!' Ash also sped of with Pikachu running behind him shouting 'Pikapi!?'

Zahra ran into the bathroom and locked the door. She pulled of her gloves and looked. 'Oh god-damn it. she said, 'I just hope Oak hasn't worked it ou...' she was interupted by a bang on the door. 'Zahra? Are you okay?' a voice said. Zahra unlocked the door and stared at Ash who stared back. Ash mouthed a phrase and Zahra nodded.

'So, thats why?' Ash found it all hard to take it in. 'Yeah..., but I can sense it with you. Maybe it takes a double team.' Ash nodded. 'It must be very hard, but' Ash stood up and looked straight ahead. 'Finding Moltres will help. After that, we can travel the world. I'm the best pokemon master.' 'And I'm the best Co-ordinator.' Zahra finished of then hugged Ash. 'I accept, I really do.'

Rk589 · **Re: Ash's BIG adventure! -** 09-05-2008

: D
I like it so far.. maybe just maybe I might read a pokemonz fanfic for the first time

zpo25 · **Re: Ash's BIG adventure! -** 09-06-2008

Thanks. I'll carry on!

*Insert Pokemon: Advanced Battle music*

*dingdong* The bell rang. The lady stood up and walked to the door. She opened it. 'Dawn! How are you?' She cuddled Dawn and replied 'Oh, I'm fine Zahra! How are the little ones?' 'Good, good. Please, sit down!' Zahra led Dawn into a massive lounge, where they both sat down. 'Good, everyone is here! Ash, kids, come on!' In the room there was yellow seats and blue walls. Brock and Daisy sat on a sofa, next to May and Max. Dawn, with her child Eve, sat on a chair, with Eve on her lap. Ash and the kids walked from outside into the lounge. Blaze and Maria started to talk to Eve, then they ran around. Ash sat next to Zahra and smilied. 'Blaze, Maria and Eve! Sit down!' The children suddenly stopped running and sat down, facing Zahra. 'Now, this is about Moltres. 20 years ago this happened. It all started on Ash's birthday!'

zpo25 · **Re: Ash's BIG adventure! -** 09-06-2008

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A 11-year old girl rushed down a path. It was a beautiful, sunny day. The sky was a Azurill blue with white, fluffly, Altaria clouds. The swallows were tweeting and it was really a lovely, summer day. Yet, Zahra didn't have time. She was late for Ash's 11 birthday party, and she was a surpise guest. 'Yep, I'll be a surpise. The only late person!' she thought. 'Um, um, UMBEROEN!' Zahra tilted her head down and around at the same time. To her left was her Umberoen, that evolved last night. 'Im so proud of you!' Zahra said as she ran like a Arcanine. 'Now, Umberoen, this 'Ash' Mum was talking about, he's supposed to be a great trainer. You can beat his 'legdanry' Pikachu, right?' The umberon shot a blast of black energy and seemed to smile. Zahra put a grin on her face. She loved that pokemon, her first. She found the injured Eevee in a trophy garden, sinnoh. She ran to a poke-centre and got the Nurse Joy to heal it. This all happened on her 10th birthday, walking to Professor Rowan's lab to get a Chimchar. She brought the Eevee with her and Rowan told her to keep it. She was happy he said that. Both trainer and pokemon. Since then Zahra had caught a shinx which is now a Luxro and a ivysaur, holding a everstone so it won't evolve. As Zahra ran to the top of the hill, she could see Halif Town beaming. 'Well, let's find out how cool this Ash is!' shouted Zahra, jumping down the hill.

zpo25 · **Re: Ash's BIG adventure! -** 09-07-2008

*Bleep-bleep* Zahra's poketch went off as she sped thorough the quiet streets of Halif Town. As she pressed the green buttons her mum's face appeared on the screen. 'Zahra, where are you?' he mum questioned. 'Sorry, I've been busy. You see my...' 'Just hurry up. Ash is eager to meet you. He's a handsome boy you know.' interuppted Zahra's mum. 'Ugh. I don't care. Look, I am in sight of Ash's house now. I'll see you in a second.' Zahra turned off the poketch. 'Beron!' Umberoen cried. 'Yes, your right Umberoen! There is Ash's house!' Zahra placed her pokemon on her shoulder, jumped over the gate and ran into the garden. Then as she finally stopped she noticed her Umberoen run over to a Pikachu and start playing. Then a boy in a red hat picked up Umberoen and stroked it. As she saw the boy, she suddenly felt weird. A new feeling, that she enjoyed.