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I Wrote This For My Girlfriend

Freddyx — Wed, 18 Nov 2009 17:46:49 GMT

yeah i know im a romantic guy lol
i love charlie so i wrote this for her :)

Charlie <3

Well i took up the challenge of trying to do 20-30 pages all about you, why i love you etc so here goes.

Charlie, you are the love of my life and you will never know how much you mean to me, yet before the raft race and before Nicky suggested it i had never thought about you as a girlfriend. But after the amazing time i had with you at the raft race i found that i did start to grow feelings for you, despite what Nicky had suggested. It took me a while to be sure of my feelings but i got there within about a week of the raft race, so i had a good long hard think about it. I had made my decision but Nicky said that:
�We would make a cute couple�
So i asked her again and she said she was positive. This gave me a lot more confidence since the last few girls i had asked out had rejected me, some rather bluntly and also due to the last few relationships i had had, which had knocked me. I asked a few of my friends if they thought me and you would make a good couple, they all happily said we did. Then came the hard part. To say i was nervous when it came to asking you out was an understatement, i was literally shaking from the adrenaline. But that fateful day came when i finally worked up the courage to ask you out and even then i was unsure on the answer, i think i was leaning more towards no yet what Nicky had said while she was round yours about me fancying you made me think you would say yes as if she was trying to hint to me. So i spent that night tossing and turning trying to think what you would say, what fun i had! I don't think i actually slept at all that night.

Then i got your answer the following day, i was over the moon, you had said yes to me! My mum came bolting up the stairs wondering what the racket was and found me bouncing off my walls with joy. I was so happy it was unreal! And i have been happy that i have you ever since.

Okay so that's how it started, I'm sure you already knew that but i figured its a good place to start.

But the main point in this essay is that I will ALWAYS love you and i mean that, until the end of time, i will never stop loving you. You mean the world to me, you are my world, my everything, the pinnacle of my life, the drive which keeps me going, my light in the dark, my angel in the night, my only one! You have no idea how much you mean to me, your more precious than all the gold, jewelry and valuables in the world, your the most precious thing in my life and i would drop everything if i had to just to be with you. Us not being able to see each other that often is an immense bummer but even if we did i would still miss you every time im not with you just like i do now, i miss you so much its unreal. I miss holding you in my arms, keeping you warm and safe, falling asleep with you and you falling asleep on me. I miss everything about you, your eyes, your smile, your humor, your beauty, your kindness and of course i miss you. I have dreams about you almost every night and they always make me happy, i wake up with a smile on my face knowing i have had an amazing dream about you. I wake up everyday knowing i get to talk to you in some way, shape or form and knowing it will make me happy. You make my day everyday, you always find someway of cheering me up if im down or just generally making me happy. I would never loose you or hurt you in any way, the thought of which i can barely imagine. I will always be yours, with you forever and a day. Even if something happened you would never loose me, we would always work things out. I can see us being together for a long time, because what we have is special and will never be broken.

An Entrapment

My love, I have tried with all my being
to grasp a form comparable to thine own,
but nothing seems worthy;

I know now why Shakespeare could not
compare his love to a summer�s day.
It would be a crime to denounce the beauty
of such a creature as thee,
to simply cast away the precision
God had placed in forging you.

Each facet of your being
whether it physical or spiritual
is an ensnarement
from which there is no release.
But I do not wish release.
I wish to stay entrapped forever.
With you for all eternity.
Our hearts, always as one.

- Anthony Kolos �

Yeah its a poem but i thought you would like it, it goes on about how i try to come up with something to express to you but nothing is good enough and that i do not want to be free, i wish to stay with you, an amazing girlfriend, trapped forever, for all eternity. Sure some of the words are a bit tough to understand but you will get it.

If asked why I love her I would say;
It�s the sway in her hips & the thickness in her thighs.
It�s the lust in her lips & the love in her eyes.
It�s the softness of her skin & the silk in her hair.
It�s the twist in her walk & it�s the sweetness in her talk.
It�s the way she loves me that makes me love her each day.
That is what I would say.

This made me think about what i would say if someone asked me why i loved you. Now i don't think there is a lad out there who hasn't had a hard time when put on the spot by the question: �why do you love her?� so i figured that, along with all the reasons posted in the above text, i would give you the reasons as to why i love you.
1. The way your eyes glimmer in the sun light.

You know you are in love
when you see the world in her eyes,
and her eyes everywhere in the world.

its not finished but im stretched for ideas..
hope you like it guys :)

ssbb story

BrawlerReal — Wed, 18 Nov 2009 04:35:48 GMT

once upon a time in mushroom kingdom princess peach was getting ready 4 a big festival. The festival was 4 mario. what happened was the last time mario saved peach he said "ha i knew i could save you because i can beat anyone" and peach said "no you cant your just a plumber" and mario said "yeah i have an idea well throw a big party and invite all the best fighters in the world to show up" so peach said "ok". so now she was waiting for all the fighters to challenge mario. the fights were fights to the very death with no holding back. "hahaha i will beat all of them because im mario" mario said. "mario dont think you will win just because you're mario because what about sonic" peach said. "sonic will never beat me" mario said. "i can beat anyone" mario said. "not so fast bro" luigi said. "im entering too" luigi said. "you mean i have to kill my own brother?" mario said. "no cause im gonna kill you im sick of you thinking your so cool prepare to die brother" luigi said. luigi punched mario and marios nose started bleeding. "hey luigi stop we got this big party set up it will be unfair to fox marth and everyone else coming if you just killed mario now" peach said. "i guess your right" luigi said. "peach i got the cheetos" toad said. "toad you �� these are the spicy ones. you know wario cant handle spicy" peach said. "its true it hurts!" wario said. "i think wario should be eating veges anyways" toad said. "why you little..." wario said. wario threw toad out the window. "ahhhhh" toad said. splat! "wario you jerk you just killed toad now whos gonna help me set up this party" peach said. "i will" wario said. wario and peach set up the party. meanwhile mario was cheating. "they cannot beat me im mario" mario said. mario slid too bricks into his gloves. "hehehehe these bricks will make my punches stronger" mario said. "aha i knew youd cheat mario so i hid in the air vent to spy on you" luigi said. "oh rats" mario said. "hey wait luigi thats cheating you cant spy on me" mario said. "so" luigi said. "so that means your disqualified from the fighting for cheating" mario said. "darn it!" luigi said. "hehehehe no one can beat mario" mario said. ding dong. peach answer the door. everyone was at the door. "welcome everyone." peach said. "when do we get to kill mario" marth said. "soon but first we will eat" peach said. "i already ate on the way here" yoshi said. "mmmmm mcdonalds" yoshi said. "okay then yoshi go sit down we are watching iron man" peach said. "yay i love that movie" yoshi said. everyone ate. "thanks for the cheetos peach" kirby said. "okay now you can all kill mario" peach said. "please form a line to kill me" mario said. fox was first. mario killed him. then kirby. mario killed him. then samus. mario killed him. one by one the fighters died. "oh no what if mario really cant be beaten" peach said. "dont worry peach i am next" wario said. wario farted on mario. "ahhhhh" mario said. mario kicked wario. wario hit the cieling and splatted. "whos next" mario said. "its me sonic" sonic said. mario pushed sonic out the window. "im unbeatable" mario said. "not so fast mario" peach said. "im going to fight you" peach said. "hahahaha a girl cant beat me" mario said. "yes i can i put bricks in my gloves" peach said. peach punched mario so hard he died. then bowser came. "hahahahaha peach this was my master plan. now that all the best fighters in the world are dead i can kidnap you." bowser said. "ahhhh" peach said. bowser and peach got married and are now living in alabama raising 2 kids.

Terrible Poems That You Shouldn't Read.

DiabloZistay — Tue, 17 Nov 2009 23:37:05 GMT

Huh... I made these poems a long time ago... but they look decent. So I decided, "What the hell," and here I am. Enjoy.

Are We Worth It?

I Gaze Out My Window,
Looking At The Beautiful City Below.
I Ask �Are We Worth It?�
To See Such Beautiful Things In Our Life�s,
Do We Deserve It?
Given To Us By God,
We Trash The World.
Are We Worth It?
As I Gaze Through The Window I See Happy Family�s,
Mothers, Fathers, Brothers, Sisters.
And I Decide,
�Yes, We Are Worth It.�

Bloody Tears

I Cry Bloody Tears.
Tears Stained With Blood Falling Down My Face.
They Dribble Down Reaching The Ground With A Plop.
My Soul Has Been Forever Cursed With My Enemies Blood.
I Cry Bloody Tears.

Death Has Come

You All Stand In A Grave Yard Mourning For Me,
You Feel The Winds Whispering My Words, I Know It.
I May Have Died But I�ll Find A Way Back,
That I Swear.
Because For Me,
Death Is But A Locked Door,
And All I Need To Do Is Find The Key.
But For Now, Wait For Me, Because He Has Come To Take His Claim,
He Has Searched For So Long, So The Debt Will Be Paid,
I Give You My Final Word, I Shall Come Back,
But Wait For Me,
Because Death Has Come.

Death�s Rose

Which Is It?
Black Or White?
Hatred Or Purity?
Death Or Innocence?
Which Is It?
Which Is�
Death�s Rose.

Flames

Flames
A Light That Forever Burns
Flames
If Touched A Scar That Forever Stays
Flames
Beautiful, Searing Hot Embers
Flames
Now Tell Me, Miracle or Curse
Flames
A Light That Forever Burns

Oblivion

I�m Walking Down A Road,
I Don�t Where, Or How, Just That I�m Walking Down A Road
I�ve Been Walking Down This Road For Uncountable Years,
I Walk Down This Black Road Surrounded By White,
I Stop.
I�m Thinking, I�m Going To Be Walking Down This Road For A Long Time.
I Know It!
Thus How The Road That Goes By The Name �Oblivion� Came To Be.

Soul�s Tragedy

I Once Asked Myself, �Can A Soul Be Hurt?�
I Didn�t Know.
I Tried Racking My Brain For The Answer,
But I Didn�t Know.
People Say A Heart Can Be Hurt,
We Know A Body Can Be Hurt,
But Can A Soul Be Hurt?
I Looked Deep In Myself,
Meditation I Believe It�s Called,
And Tried To Find My Soul.
After Searching, And Searching,
I Had Found My Soul,
Or Rather,
A Soul�s Million Pieces.
When I Became Focused Again, I Asked Myself The Same Question,
�Can A Soul Be Hurt?�
No, I Thought, Because From The Day Your Born Till The Day You Die,
Your Soul�s Forever�
A Tragedy.

Twilight

What Happened?
I Feel� Nothing?
Where Am I?
I Can�t See?!
No, Wait I See� Black? Grey?
I See� Myself?
No�
My Shadow?
Now I Understand.
I Made A Mistake.
And Now I Have A Curse.
To Live With Never-Ending, Ever-Changing�
Twilight.

What A Fool

A King, Named Loki, Once Said That He Would Give The World Peace,
I Had Asked Him, �How?�,
I�ll Admit I Was Interested.
He Answered By Saying, �World Domination�.
I Choked On My Spit, Yelling �What!�,
I Looked Up To See If He Was Serious.
He Was.
Just To Make Sure I Wasn�t Assuming Anything, I Asked,
�You Don�t Mean Your Going To Kill To Achieve World Peace, Do You?!�
He Replied By Answering,
�That�s Exactly What I Plan To Do, And Then The World Shall Know Pain.�
Shing! Thud. Click-Click�
Nobody Noticed His Detached Head Until Morning.
I Had Only One Thought While Leaving,
�What A Fool.�

Hope you enjoyed. Whether, praise or criticism, please comment.

Ja Ne~

Metroid Prime Trilogy Part 1: Mysteries of Tallon IV

Writer1 — Sat, 07 Nov 2009 20:20:24 GMT

Before i post the story i would just like to say that this is (obviously) a metroid prime fan fic
please note that i am trying to stay as true to the games as i can while still giving it my own creative charm
also it might be a while inbetween chapters because i have many other creative writings in the wroks (non fan fic ones that kinda take priority)
If you enjoy reading it as much as i like writing it please comment
if you have creative suggestions please pm me and i will consider them (if they work with my agenda for this trilogy)
If you don't care for it because it is not true to the series or something like that please let me know how i can adress such an issue
If you want to flame me out for "ruining metroid" please do it somewhere else
Enjoy :)

ps i know some of the chapters are short, just bear with me....

quick poem

doublejj — Tue, 03 Nov 2009 20:32:16 GMT

day by day i hear the clock
and day by day i waste my life
and day by day i miss your smell
and time and time again i act swell when i'm not
nothing to do nowhere to move on to
what do you do when you have to leave but you can't
you need to focus on your work but you can't keep looking
you do stuff to be with her
you skip things to be with her
you know your not whipped just thinking
but what happens when it all comes crashing down?
when your the only one in the ghost town?
i know a few that knows this
how about you?

i got some more in my blog you can look and comment if you want.

The Avengers: Part 1

GENIUS — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 21:11:59 GMT

In the year 2053 the world is on the verge of War! Between the Humanist Empire that consists of China, India, and Malaysa and a small group of people who hate the environmental crimes they have continued to commit. The biggest one of these is the use of fossil fuels that was declared an international crime in 2031 by the UN. This small group called the Avengers is lead by one crazy slightly insane leader who has little regard for anyone who harms the environment or any wildlife. His favorite use of torture is drowning anyone caught wasting energy or littering into a pool of Sulfuric acid! Now the crazy scientist Dr. Countbleh is experimenting with the world's first Anti-Matter based bomb.Llike the leader who will be featured in Part 2 is insane with little regard for Humanists as people who harm the Earth are now known as. He already invented the Laser knife a kitchen utensil that cooks and cuts your bread at the same time. He is growing frustrated on the inability of a magnetic field to safely contain the Anti-matter. This and all of his and the leaders mental problems will be featured in Part 2.

Bloodied Brush (For Nanowrimo)

Shivam — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 18:58:59 GMT

Well... Uhh... This is my Nanowrimo (National Novel Writing Month) entry, and as you can tell it's called Bloodied Brush. I will do my best to keep this updated as I write, although I frankly doubt I'll be able to finish the story by the end of November, but hey, I'm already 1/10th of the way there... Oh, by the way I cheated, don't tell anyone o;. Since I have about 10 pages so far, I'll go with updating every 1/2-1 week so I can at least keep slightly ahead of the updates. Now that this is over, I hope you enjoy reading, and are not dissatisfied by my writing =).

Contents
Prologue and Chapter 1 - All below.
Chapter 2 -
Chapter 3 -
Chapter 4 -
Chapter 5-

Okay, here it comes, I'll start with the prologue and a little of chapter 1, by the way, constructive critiscisms and any help in how to improve is more than welcome.
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Prologue: The Unknown Town

It was early morning, and dawn broke over the quaint and slightly futuristic town of Spurnsville – the place where the adventure begins. The town was much more modern than any of the other cities in the world – even Tokyo. Of course, no one knew about Spurnsville. If people found out about this wonderful safe haven, with severed ties from the rest of the planet, they might attempt to move here – which would make the town overcrowded. Originally, Spurnsville wasn’t a very good, or known town – it was like a hamlet which was ignored. Soon after, peasants (the really poor type) moved to the hamlet, making it slightly larger. Even more began to flock after they had found fertile land to plant crops. After that, the history is mostly legend – that is until he came. He was a scientist who wanted a town just for himself. He had the brain that swelled with the most intelligence, his eyes sparkling with a deeper understanding of the universe that no one else had. In one snap of his fingers and 10 minutes of work by his androids the base for a new life for the town was built. In another snap of his fingers, the peasants – even the idiots who didn’t know anything started to learn, they knew how lots of things worked, even the terrible wars going on, the bombings of the cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki, too. They didn’t have the understanding he did, but they understood what needed to be done. They began to build amazing structures, that in light of those; you could call structures like the giant robot in Japan barbaric. These structures were impervious to all natural disasters – death by fire, death by earth, death by wind, death by water – all ignored. These structures defied all logic and defined what it meant to understand how it works. No one truly knows what these structures look like, and what the other ones they built looked like (the city is somehow cloaked in a type of field). Even the descendants of their families have forgotten how the buildings have been made, but what they do know, is that they haven’t lost their touch, and that if you cross the barrier... It all ends. However, there is one individual, who would sacrifice all the work he did... The tale begins here – in this town – in this mystery...

(I'd also like to notify you that we may not look at him LOL).