If you're going to have a nice little conversation about the name of the 'c4d', then please take it to PM's.
And Tsun is right, a "C4D render" is referred to the result of something made with the program Cinema 4D. If you didn't use that program, then you didn't really make what's commonly known as a c4d =P
Aside from that, it's not bad. C4d's usually have more defined edges and shapes, often with 3D-like elements as well (not always). Sometime's they're blurred, but.. sort of... differently =/
Anyway, good attempt. Keep at it =)