My first Roy drawing... Please comment!

[LoveLucario]

Originally Posted by ZeroMercy

Well, thats my first attempt at a drawing of roy as seen on SSBM. Please remember that when judging, this is my first attempt. I would also appreciate additional comments. If you don't like it, just tell me what I need to change next time. Thank you. And the only real flaw that I see are the eyes. And thats only because my pencil wouldnt erease when I made a mistake.

You cant say it sucks :P drawing takes time. Im not the best but ive looked from the first to last pic and my thread and noticed improvements. You just have to keep drawing. Each one you finish youll be amazed but then you want more, and want a better drawing. An easy way to start off, is to start by drawing pokemon. They look cool and are for the most part simple to draw. I think your picture is great. When ever i show my fridnds my pictures they hate them because of who i draw and they havent once said my drawings are good. Anyways just keep trying. Its been about 5 months for me and ive had huge improvements

[DeGoZaRu]

It's a good drawing, you just need to touch it up a bit.

[Traeto]

I'm gonna list off a couple things to improve the pictures
1) Use colored pencil, it looks better than crayon like 99% of the time
2) Draw lightly first, so if you have to erase you wont get those nasty eraser marks.
3) Try not to bend and fold your paper :eek:

But otherwise, it looks like it has some potential. Keep it up :D