Its a good first tutorial. First thing i noticed though is Devaint art.
Devaint art is a no no for anything Graphics related. Its called Ripping unless you are download the packs that specify you are allowed to use them.
The tutorial nice and clear, although the text looks slightly blurry to me.. thats probably the monitor though. Also at teh top of the tutorial, the text is out of line.
Also, i see a few typo's.
Other than that it's a very good first attempt.