Could someone please rate my team?

[darkumbreon135]

So yeah, I'll try and sort that metagross out, and make some move changes. It might take a while, but I'll battle you when I'm done. thanks everyone!

[Cyuper]

Right. T.T Don't teach him HP flying.
Yeah metagross is good.

[darkumbreon135]

Yeah. It has pretty much the same defence as t-tar, and having an exploder is always good.

I thought about having 252 defence EVs, and 252 sp defence EVs, with the last 10 or so in attack. Would that work? I know it would only have around 270+ attack, but it would mak a great wall and it could fight back pretty well too.

[Ballade]

Originally Posted by darkumbreon135

Yeah. It has pretty much the same defence as t-tar, and having an exploder is always good.

I thought about having 252 defence EVs, and 252 sp defence EVs, with the last 10 or so in attack. Would that work? I know it would only have around 270+ attack, but it would mak a great wall and it could fight back pretty well too.

No, mixed walls don't work as well as mixed sweepers. Focus on one end and if need be, have a Screen that covers the other end.

[ImNotGood]

team sucks, no descriptions. try adding them next time.

[darkumbreon135]

Huh? How does my team suck?

[ImNotGood]

my bad, the description sucks, elaborate on it.

[90HeroMAXD]

Originally Posted by darkumbreon135

Could you rate this team please? I need the natures, nicknames, pokemon, Moves, and stats rated. Thanks.

1st: Tyranitar (Anastasia)
Sassy nature, often dozes off.
Hp 366, atk 318 Def 263 sp atk 228 sp def 254 speed 164
Outrage, Earthquake, Stone Edge, Payback.
Lum Berry Held.
Its stats are all avarage which is good I guess, but you should've tried to at least get one or two at the max stat. Breloom can do a number with spore(though its considered "cheap and banned) I still use it.
I forgot what Lum Berry does but give it something like that reduces Fight based attacks or a focus sash(not sure if that's not allowed as well)

2nd: Swampert (Landslide)
Timid Nature, Quick to flee.
Hp 322 atk 232 def 230 sp atk 228 sp def 228 speed 196
Surf, Stone Edge, Earthquake, Hammer Arm.
Mystic Water held.
No Roar, Remove Surf replace it with Waterfall, Hammer Arm Should be replaced with Roar.Where's stealth Rock, Swampert perfect job is kind of down though because of its weak defense.

3rd: Charizard (Demonwing)
Mild Nature, Mischevious.
Hp 317 atk 197 def 174 sp atk 309 sp def 230 speed 259
Fire Blast, Focus Blast, Dragon Pulse, Air Slash.
Wide Lens held.
I just checked Charizards stats. They aren't good. HP is right around Minimum boarder, Atk sucks, Def near -minimum, Special A is bordered to max
Both Special D and Speed are at avarage
I really recommend you switch this an Ice Punch electravier can finish this off. Or Stone Edge Salamance

4th: Umbreon (Midnight)
Sassy Nature, Strongly Defiant
Hp 315 atk 144 def 289 sp atk 141 sp def 379 speed 136
Rest, Payback, Screech, Curse.
Chesto Berry held.
ATK is worthless, Special A is 1 point above -minimum, Defense is Avarages Special Defense is very good. Speed is SLOW.
I see this is your stall pokemon. Just be careful with Breloom give it a Lum Berry(or any berry that cures stats alliminents) That way Breloom can't spam Dynamic Punch.
Screech really can't do much with pay back(at least I think) since Pay back just doubles(?) the damage you that you took by the original opponents attack damage.

5th: Gengar (Shadowseek)
Timid Nature, Thouroughly Cunning.
Hp 244 atk 134 def 128 sp atk 350 sp def 155 speed 335
Phychic, Shadow Ball, Sludge Bomb, Destiny Bond
Focus Sash held.
HP sucks(below Minimum which on Smogon doesn't even show its pretty bad) Below the minus minimum is ATK and Defense is 28 points below -min, SP A is right below Max Speical D is below -min, Speed is right in between max and +max.
Over all its only pro is its Speed everything else is just terrible. I understand Gengar doesn't have many pros, but if its below -min on stats its a problem, at least in my eyes.

6th: Breloom (Loomer)
Jolly Nature, Likes to Run.
Hp 255 atk 289 def 207 sp atk 116 sp def 161 speed 256
Spore, Drain Punch, Substitute, Leech Seed.
Focus Sash Held.
HP: Below -Min, ATK isn't great for a Breloom, Defense is Avarage pretty good for a Breloom, Special A is below -min, but Breloom doesn't focus on that, Speical D is below -min, Spd is very close to +max.

This is pretty good, but its Speical D should've been covered a bit, when I EV trained my Breloom for the first time. I focused on Def, SP.D and a bit on ATK. Though I didn't focus on SPD its Nature give it a slight SPD boost on stat points. Like I said many people will hate you if you use Spore.

I also have a couple extras.

Meganium (Sunbeam)
Relaxed Nature, Capable Of Taking Hits.
Hp 284 atk 194 def 300 sp atk 214 sp def 270 speed 160
Petal Dance, Synthesis, Solarbeam, Sunny Day
Heat Rock held.

Skarmory (Ironhawk)
Calm Nature, Good Endurance.
Hp 271 atk 153 def 357 sp atk 87 sp def 226 speed 170
Spikes, Roar, Stealth Rock, Roost.

Garchomp (Chomper)
Adamant Nature, Likes To Run.
Hp 372 atk 348 def 237 sp atk 193 sp def 181 speed 264
Giga Impact, Swords Dance, Earthquake, Dragon Rush.
Muscle Band held.

Shuckle (Megashell)
Careful Nature, Capable Of Taking Hits.
Hp 171 atk 62 def 516 sp atk 63 sp def 543 speed 59
Ability: Sturdy.
Rest, Protect, Double Team, Toxic
Leftovers Held.

Arcanine (Okibi)
Quiet Nature, Likes To Thrash About.
Hp 314 atk 287 def 212 sp atk 279 sp def 200 speed 189
Ability: Flash Fire
Flare Blitz, Fire Blast, Reversal, Extremespeed.
Charcoal Held.

Thanks again. Any reccomendations would be greatly appreciated. Thanks again.

Fro first glance Ice beam can do a number on you. Especially your extra slot.


Over all your gonna have to work some more to perfect your team. Im not checking on extras.
PS: Im not the best rater so don't follow my advice as soon as I posted this, wait for a while and read everyones that seems informative that way you get mixed opinions Follow the ones that seem perfect or right for you.