[Lollie]

So I've decided to make my team fairly even, with a mix of both uu, bl, and ou pokemon. Please rate and critize ^_^




Absol w/ Scope Lens
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Super Luck
EVs: Attack, Speed
Moveset: Sucker Punch, Psycho Cut, Aerial Ace, Stone Edge.





Togekiss w/ Lum Berry
Nature: Modest
Ability: Serene Grace
EVs: HP, Sp. Attack, Sp. Defense
Moveset: Thunder Wave, Roost, Water Pulse, Air Slash.





Ninetales w/ Wide Lens
Nature: Timid
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: Sp. Attack, Speed
Moveset: Nasty Plot, Hypnosis, Heat Wave, Energy Ball.





Ursaring w/ Toxic Orb
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Quick Feet
EVs: HP, Attack
Moveset: Swords Dance, Facade, Close Combat, Earthquake.





Crobat w/ Life Orb
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: Attack, Speed
Moveset: Hypnosis, Confuse Ray, Brave Bird, Cross Poison.





Lucario w/ Choice Specs
Nature: Modest
Ability: Steadfast
EVs: Sp. Attack, Speed
Moveset: Vacuum Wave, Flash Cannon, Dark Pulse, Dragon Pulse.

[Hanz174]

Originally Posted by LotusRoseWolf

So I've decided to make my team fairly even, with a mix of both uu, bl, and ou pokemon. Please rate and critize ^_^




Absol w/ Scope Lens
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Super Luck
Moveset: Sucker Punch, Psycho Cut, Aerial Ace, Stone Edge.

Nothing wrong with Absol, EV spread?



Togekiss w/ Lum Berry
Nature: Modest
Ability: Serene Grace
Moveset: Thunder Wave, Roost, Water Pulse, Air Slash.

Nice Hax Flincher. Very standard, but helps out your team. Water pulse? How about Aura Sphere to get damage on rocks and steels.



Ninetales w/ Wise Glasses
Nature: Timid
Ability: Flash Fire
Moveset: Nasty Plot, Hypnosis, Flamethrower, Energy Ball.

Nice, I've got a ninetales that has the same moveset. If you're not worried about the extra damage from wise glasses, you could get a wide lens to help out the acuracy of hypnosis.



Ursaring w/ Toxic Orb
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Quick Feet
Moveset: Swords Dance, Facade, Close Combat, Earthquake.

Good choice on the quick feet/toxic orb combo. Swords Dance when needed, Facade for Stab, and EQ and CC for type coverage.



Crobat w/ Leftovers
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Inner Focus
Moveset: Steel Wing, Zen Butthead Lol, headbutt, Brave Bird, Cross Poison.

Even though this is a good moveset, Crobat doesn't really have any physical power with that speed, so try a hazing, sleeping, or disrupting Crobat. Roost can help too.



Lucario w/ Choice Specs
Nature: Modest
Ability: Steadfast
Moveset: Aura Sphere, Vacuum Wave, Shadow Ball, Dragon Pulse.

Special Sweeping Lucario is a nice surprise from the physical ones. You could put some different attacks in, like Psychic, Dark Pulse, or Hidden Power.

Half of your team is weak to Rock. (Togekiss, Nintales, Crobat, although Togekiss and Crobat can roost, lessening the risk.) The other half is weak to Fighting. (Absol, Ursaring, Lucario) You really should have a few tanks in here, and I need EV spreads to really see how these pokemon would do.

[Lollie]

Thanks I didn't see that there XD;;
I must have been sleepy or dazing off or whatever LoL

To be honest Hanz I don't like tanks, because most of them don't appeal to me due to their appearance (that's right, I don't like any of the tanks since most are ugly XD) and most of them have low power. I like power, so I've tried to put up at least one pokemon on my team that is a bit of a tank (togekiss). But that's it really. Thanks for the help though, and I've edited my mistake -.-;;

[Jackfrost]

Um about the lucario dark pulse pretty much covers everything shadow ball would. And maybe add Dragon Pulse on to take on those salamences but i rather have Hidden Power Ice 65+. Try putting in something that can take physical hits and maybe a tank. I'm just saying bulky pokemon could help ur team, but its my opinion.

[Phazon]

Crobat with Leftovers is really ineffective.
Life Orb would help.
Other than that, I dont really know.
I mean, theres no basis to the team since your baseing it off something else.
Without a basis, Cant really help.

[Sumeet]

Originally Posted by LotusRoseWolf

So I've decided to make my team fairly even, with a mix of both uu, bl, and ou pokemon. Please rate and critize ^_^




Absol w/ Scope Lens
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Super Luck
EVs: Attack, Speed
Moveset: Sucker Punchmaybe u shouldnt use this if u have ev'es in speed, Psycho Cut, Aerial Ace, Stone Edge.




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Togekiss w/ Lum Berry
Nature: Modest
Ability: Serene Grace
EVs: HP, Sp. Attack, Sp. Defense
Moveset: Thunder Wave, Roost, Water Pulsewhy not something better?, Air Slash.
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Ninetales w/ Wide Lens
Nature: Timid
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: Sp. Attack, Speed
Moveset: Nasty Plot, Hypnosis, Heat Wave, Energy Ball.yeah fine





Ursaring w/ Toxic Orb
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Quick Feet
EVs: HP, Attack
Moveset: Swords Dance, Facade, Close Combat, Earthquake.fine





Crobat w/ Leftovers
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: Attack, Speed
Moveset: Hypnosis, Confuse Ray, Brave Birdtry arieal ace, Cross Poison.





Lucario w/ Choice Specs
Nature: Modest
Ability: Steadfast
EVs: Sp. Attack, Speed
Moveset: Aura Sphere, Flash Cannon, Dark Pulse, Dragon Pulse.fine

ur team is fine not much too comment about maybe u need some elemental attacker, starmie or something

[Pike]

For Crobat, I actually say leave Brave Bird in, it can do 180 w/ STAB while Aerial Ace only does 90. It may lose more PP, but a Crobat doesn't have the best defenses anyway, and usually is one of the fastest pokemon on the field. As people before me have said, leftovers doesn't do much justice. I reccomend a Focus Sash just in case you get ohko'd (Which will probably happen more than a few times).

@Ursarang, Everything is fine but the orb. If you get walled being badly poisoned, I recommend a Flame Orb, it takes out a steady amount of HP every turn instead of the increasing damage. Also, there's a good chance that it can get shut down by almost any ghost pokemon. So I recommended you should change Brick Break to either Night Slash or Stone Edge.

[Moniker]

For the record, Scope Lens is considered a hax item. Might want to change that to Life Orb/Focus Sash. Swords Dance over Night Slash, as well.

Haxkiss=fail.

I'd recommend Life Orb on Ninetales as well. You'll want the extra kick, and she's not taking hits.

Aside from that, it's a pretty frail team...whether you like tanks or not, I'd invest in them. Swampert makes short work of this team. Nidoqueen/king as well.

[m1kefuerte]

well, this team has pretty much sweepers in it. Tanks will be needed, and yeah, swampert will have easy pickings once ninetales is gone, and with no risk from energy ball Also, this team cant be used in standard play, since of the hax items, but i dont really mind. Plus, superluck absol's night slash OWNS. If uve invested a lot on speed, then i seriously urge u to go with night slash over sucker punch. I'd really use aura sphere over water pulse for togekiss. Ninetales is pretty standard. Ursaring's fine. Crobat for me is a very good candidate for choice band, if its gonna be a sweeper. If its gonna be an annoyer, then be warned that it is very frail, so it wont last. Brave Bird will lessen its time in it, so choose wisely: Brave bird for more power, or aerial ace to last a little bit longer. Lucario is AWESOME. Kudos for choosing it as a SPECIAL sweeper over a physical sweeper Psychic may help to cover its fighting weakness.

Over-all, the team needs walls, and maybe an overall theme, or strategy. A good solid start though

[Shiki]

Originally Posted by LotusRoseWolf

So I've decided to make my team fairly even, with a mix of both uu, bl, and ou pokemon. Please rate and critize ^_^




Absol w/ Scope Lens
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Super Luck
EVs: Attack, Speed
Moveset: Sucker Punch, Psycho Cut, Aerial Ace, Stone Edge.





Togekiss w/ Lum Berry
Nature: Modest
Ability: Serene Grace
EVs: HP, Sp. Attack, Sp. Defense
Moveset: Thunder Wave, Roost, Water Pulse, Air Slash.





Ninetales w/ Wide Lens
Nature: Timid
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: Sp. Attack, Speed
Moveset: Nasty Plot, Hypnosis, Heat Wave, Energy Ball.





Ursaring w/ Toxic Orb
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Quick Feet
EVs: HP, Attack
Moveset: Swords Dance, Facade, Close Combat, Earthquake.





Crobat w/ Leftovers
Nature: Jolly
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: Attack, Speed
Moveset: Hypnosis, Confuse Ray, Brave Bird, Cross Poison.





Lucario w/ Choice Specs
Nature: Modest
Ability: Steadfast
EVs: Sp. Attack, Speed
Moveset: Aura Sphere, Flash Cannon, Dark Pulse, Dragon Pulse.

OMG. COPYCAT. Youz stolez me Ninetails and my Ursaring. Well then, I pray that you use them properly please >.>