RMT, please?

[Vana]

Here is a team I have been working on
Im not that good at team building so it probably pretty bad and very OU

Alakzam-Spec. Sweeper-Life Orb-Timid
252 SpA/6 SpD /252 Speed
Psychic
Focus Blast
Shadow Ball
Charge Beam

Donphan-Starter-Leftovers-Impish
252 HP/6 Atk/252 Def
Rapid Spin
Earthquake
Ice Shard
Stealth Rock

Salamence-DD'er-Life Orb-Adamant
120 HP/252 Atk/136 Spe
Dragon Dance
Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Stone Edge

Dusknoir-Tank-Left Overs
252 HP / 252 Def / 6 SpD
Will-O-Wisp
Fire Punch
ThunderPunch
Pain Split

Weavile-Sweeper-Choice band
40hp/252 Atk / 216 Spe
Pursuit
Ice Punch
Brick Break
Aerial Ace


Magmortar-Mixed Attacker-Expert Belt-Mild
84 Atk/252 SpA/172 Spe
Lava Plume / Fire Blast
Thunderbolt
Hidden Power Ice
Cross Chop

[Swinger]

Originally Posted by Vanadras

Here is a team I have been working on
Im not that good at team building so it probably pretty bad and very OU

Alakzam-Starter-Focus Sash Counter-Alakazam is one of the worst starters in this game. If they have set up pokemon, Alakazam is screwed, and if they have a special attack starter you're even more dead. CS Alakazam can scare and wreak much more havoc than this Alakazam
Counter
Taunt
Knock Off
Physic

Donphan-Rapid Spinner-Leftovers Fine.
Rapid Spin
Earthquake
Ice Shard
Stealth Rock

Salamence-DD'er-Life Orb Very OU,try getting the wishmence:rare and unique, still pretty beast though.
Dragon Dance
Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Stone Edge

Gallade-Sweeper-Life Orb Terrible. Gallade was never good, the only good thing was to switch in on a flinch to gain a boost. Though able to take a hit, Electivire has more coverage and can put a much bigger dent into an enemy team.
Psycho Cut
Swords Dance
Close Combat
Ice Punch

Dusknoir-Tank-Left Overs Er, Donphan and Dusknoir? Quite low health for both of them. I recommend Cresselia or Cleric Bliss
Will-O-Wisp
Fire Punch
ThunderPunch
Pain Split

Weavile-Sweeper-Choice band Punch, CS Garchomp usually isnt that common on Friend codes
Pursuit
Ice Shard/Punch (Cant decide)
Brick Break
Aerial Ace

6/10 team, I would say. Your team is really fragile!

[Vana]

Originally Posted by Swinger

6/10 team, I would say. Your team is really fragile!

How can I improve it then?

[850plushours]

Read the "quoted" part of his post. He put suggestions in BOLD text next to your pokemon. =)

[Vana]

Originally Posted by 850plushours

Read the "quoted" part of his post. He put suggestions in BOLD text next to your pokemon. =)

I did, and I want to know how I can improve upon my team

[Nolie]

Originally Posted by Vanadras

Here is a team I have been working on
Im not that good at team building so it probably pretty bad and very OU

Alakzam-Starter-Focus Sashtake advantage of his sweeper abilities
Counter
Taunt
Knock Off
Physic

Donphan-Rapid Spinner-Leftovers
Rapid Spin
Earthquake
Ice Shard
Stealth Rockwhy not put him first?

Salamence-DD'er-Life Orbgood physical sweeper
Dragon Dance
Dragon Claw
Earthquake
Stone Edge

Gallade-Sweeper-Life Orbtwo is fine
Psycho Cut
Swords Dance
Close Combat
Ice Punch

Dusknoir-Tank-Left Overs
Will-O-Wisp
Fire Punchhow about ice punch
ThunderPunch
Pain Split

Weavile-Sweeper-Choice band
Pursuit
Ice Shard/Punch (Cant decide)definalty punch he has beastly speed already
Brick Break
Aerial Ace

lots of physical sweepers

[Vana]

Originally Posted by Sumeet

lots of physical sweepers

What if I replace Gallade for a Cleric and change Alakzam to a sweeper?

[rhadfii]

First off you need to post EV spreads and natures. Second clerics seem like a good idea but in reality all you are really doing is giving your opponent a free turn to set up. You also have to many pokemon with sweeper characteristics. Your team could do with another wall. Or you could make donphan your physical wall and dusknoir your special wall.

[Levi]

Lol Cool. =]

[m1kefuerte]

this team lacks a special sweeper, and is actually pretty weak to starmie :| also, i think you should post evs and natures if they were evD. If not, lessen the physical sweepers, add a special sweeper OR fix alakazam, and add a special tank

BTW, i think a salamence with wish is illegal, since its impossible to learn it, unless its a hack, OR it is legal, IF its a rrrrreeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaalllllllllyyyyyyyy rare event. Wish on a mence doesnt really sound nice to me :|

EDIT: oooppss!! my bad, wish IS legal, but only through an event, BUT, wish on something with less than average defenses, and an average hp, doesnt really appeal to me, but it could surprise