[Nintenster]

So basically im in rebuild and ive just figured my first 3

Celebi lvl 87 @ life orb
Naughty
Natural cure
att/sp.att
hp:284 Ancient Power
att:258 Perish Song
def:197 Leech Seed(looking to replace)
sp.att:222 Psychic
sp.def:171
spd:205

Electivire lvl 69 @ muscle band
Lonely
Motor Drive
att
hp:188 Psychic
att:242 Thunder
def:106 Giga Impact
sp.att192 (still deciding)
sp.def:134
spd138

Metagross lvl 100 - shiny @ life orb
Adamant
Clear Body
att/sp.att/def/sp.def/spd
hp:321
att:368 Bullet Punch
def:321 Meteor Mash
sp.att:203 Hammer Arm
sp.def:241 Zen Headbutt
spd:203

[Moniker]

Just so you know, Naughty is a horrible nature for Celebi. I'd recommend either Modest or Timid for what you're trying to achieve. Lonely isn't a bad nature for Electivire, but Jolly or Adamant would probably suit you better.

Adamant on Metagross is a good nature. Your 'gross isn't that great, though. I'd find a new one.

One more thing - Mewtwo's an uber. I wouldn't recommend using it in competitive play. Most people have rules against them in matches.

[Nintenster]

Originally Posted by Werelynx

Just so you know, Naughty is a horrible nature for Celebi. I'd recommend either Modest or Timid for what you're trying to achieve. Lonely isn't a bad nature for Electivire, but Jolly or Adamant would probably suit you better.

Adamant on Metagross is a good nature. Your 'gross isn't that great, though. I'd find a new one.

One more thing - Mewtwo's an uber. I wouldn't recommend using it in competitive play. Most people have rules against them in matches.

thanks for the comments
oh could you recommend some a good move to replace celebi's leech seed

btw mewtwo is just a filler for my sixth slot

[Outlawed]

Son, please, please, please
follow this format

<Pokemon> @ <Held Item>
<Nature>
<Ability>
<EV Spread>
- <Move 1>
- <Move 2>
- <Move 3>
- <Move 4>

[Moniker]

Originally Posted by Outlawed

Son, please, please, please
follow this format

<Pokemon> @ <Held Item>
<Nature>
<Ability>
<EV Spread>
- <Move 1>
- <Move 2>
- <Move 3>
- <Move 4>

Man knows his business.

Anyway, Leech Seed isn't a half bad move for Celebi. If you want to go all-out attacking, though, I'd stick with Calm Mind/Psychic/Energy Ball/Earth Power, or maybe a good Hidden Power like Fighting or Fire.

[Nintenster]

i see ill make adjustments now

[Nintenster]

for my fourth

Shuckle/none
Lonely
Sturdy
hp:164 Power Trick
att:27 Gyro Ball
def:427 Earthquake
sp.att:31 Stone Edge(might change to trick room)
sp.def:481
spd:22


i was planning on using power trick to switch att with def
and then finish with gyro ball or earthquake.

[UnknownSupreme]

Originally Posted by Nintenster

for my fourth

Shuckle/none
Lonely
Sturdy
hp:164 Power Trick
att:27 Gyro Ball
def:427 Earthquake
sp.att:31 Stone Edge(might change to trick room)
sp.def:481
spd:22


i was planning on using power trick to switch att with def
and then finish with gyro ball or earthquake.

That will need Trick Room support, or good luck keeping that alive after Power Trick. Also, Lonely isn't a good idea. Run Bold since it switches attack with defense. And it can't learn Trick Room. And keep EQ and Stone Edge. You can consider Rock Slide since it'll have such high attack.

[getrdunne]

if you are using a power trick shucke do not use a lonely nature. i would suggest impish for the best results.

the reason i do not suggest lonely is because it is +atk -sp. def.
shuckle is designed to take special hits and you dont want to limit its strengths. also shuckle's attack stat isnt worth increasing at all. you just need to make sure taht you have completely eliminated any physical attacker on your opponents team before breaking out the power trick.

other than that you seem pretty good

[Nintenster]

ok im gonna work on shuckle
heres my fifth

Absol lvl 20 (UT)
Timid
Super Luck
hp:60
att:52 Taunt
def:32 Pursuit
sp.att:35 Razor Wind
sp.def:29 Quick Attack
spd:39

i was hopin to ev him in spd
the moves are going to change
scope lens to add to critical hit ratio